Trick or Treat...Halloween Sneak Peek...

[ginevrasm]

Graphic M/F sex follows.  Usual disclaimers apply.  I'm marking this one as "friends only" for your viewing pleasure.

Chapter Nine:  The Payoff

I had had enough of living through other people’s dreams.  It was time to give my darling lover a little reality check.  Now that I’d tasted the forbidden fruit, I was hungry for something more…

Comments

[echtrae_cuinn]

Well, I read this while eating my lunch. I am now thinking that I'm going to have to find the rest of this story.

Very well done. A few typos, but overall quite good.

[madlodger_007]

Wouldn't it be cool to actually have those powers? I bet, this sort of ability enhances sexual experience to the extreme. And a bit of UST which ends up resolved - ha!, doesn't hurt.
Nice piece, I enjoyed it :)

[ginevrasm]

Glad you folks enjoyed. Of course I enjoyed writing it. I'll be doing my final edits soon. I may wait a few more days before posting it. I'm milking the latest page for Burning Brightly, still.

This last chapter gave me some trouble...With all the prior chapters building up to it, I was afraid it would fizzle. Also, I'm really not all that into Scott. He's too uptight for me.

Oh yes...I'm pretty sure Jean's powers could be very "enhancing" if she loosened up to use them that way. I know I'd have fun with them myself.

[dazzledfirestar]

I lovelovelove this story! And I love this chapter! Thank you so much for the preview. How Jean keeps that good girl thing going in a mansion full of fabulously sexy men... I'll never know. I couldn't do it! LOL

Happy you liked it Daz...

[ginevrasm]

I think sharing a household with the most powerful telepath on the planet plus assorted nosy teens might have something to do with being "good." But yeah...How could you keep your mind on anything with all those super hot guys around?

I really think she gets off on knowing they all want her...secretly of course.

I think I'll be posting the final chapter on AFF today.