Comments | ginchy: "Echoes of Always" - Luke/Mara

ginchy

"Echoes of Always" - Luke/Mara - Chapter 15, April 16

Apr 16, 2012 11:21

Chapter 15 has two of my favorite scenes in it. I hope you all will enjoy, too!

( Chapter 15 )

luke skywalker, l/m, nano, star wars, alternate universe, mara jade

Comments 11

jedimara77 April 16 2012, 15:26:24 UTC

The chips. And the hug. Waaaaaahhhh! Just what I needed to get me out of my cranky pants mood. :)

I don't know any other way to say: I LOVE IT. ALL OF IT. ALL OF THIS STORY!!!

ginchy April 20 2012, 14:25:13 UTC

I hope it did help with the cranky mood and that you're having a better day today!! *hugs*

I'm so glad you love this story. That means the galaxy to me!!!!

valeria057 April 16 2012, 18:13:32 UTC

Yes, I understand what you mean, talking about favourite scenes))
The "chips" episode is just beautiful...

ginchy April 20 2012, 14:26:25 UTC

Thank you!! The chips are based on my own little toddler who is a potato chip fanatic. LOL I'm so glad you loved that story. It broke my heart but made me smile at the same time.

briannakin April 16 2012, 18:39:14 UTC

WHAT?! Corran doesn't have a beard? What kind of universe is this? ;p

I understand what you mean about the two favorite scenes. I loved the cooking together, Mara retelling the chip story and the hug <3

ginchy April 20 2012, 14:27:13 UTC

LOL!! It's one where everythings is turned upside down!! ;)

I'm glad you liked the scenes that were my faves. I was a little worried about the chip scene but I'm glad it went over well. Thanks!!

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ginchy April 20 2012, 14:27:54 UTC

So do I, gal. More than any other fandom, Luke is the character that I want to be happy. Thank you so, so much!!

katajanmaria April 21 2012, 10:46:11 UTC

OMG OMG OMG - crying my eyes out here!! this was so beautilful!!!Luek and Ben are awesome together - but Luke and Betrys beats them. She's so sweet and concerned!!!

Can't believe I missed TWO updates!

I adore that Mara trusts Luke implicitely, that she dares show her care opently(at elast to Corran) and how she and Luke just want to be clsoe. The entire text is vibrating with longuing!
Corran wa s ablast too - his interaction with Mara - both the tease and the care - and how he falls back on his Cor Serc training as soon as the shock wars off

"You always said that the Jedi were a family. Now is when you need that family."

- that made ma awwww!

I also love how Luke finally can let go - very, very beaufully written! I'm happy that in canon he's been mature and able to do that too - but there we haven't seen him deal with his emotions as you show here! Awesome!!!

ginchy April 23 2012, 14:09:13 UTC

Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked Luke's letting go. Carrying all that hurt around is just too huge and overwhelming. He needed to ease up on himself so he could move on. I'm sorry to make you cry your eyes out!! *hugs* But I'm so glad you enjoyed the scenes with the kids. And how Corran notices the intimacy between L/M without them even trying. It just is.