A Fairy's Tale of Moonlit Skin and Windblown Angels

Sep 05, 2008 17:06

Title: A Fairy's Tale of Moonlit Skin and Windblown Angels
Pairing: Pete/Patrick
Rating: Hard R, but not very much sexualness in it. NOT an AU, just talks about magic a bit, you'll see.
Summary: A boy stuck in a man's body, a man's world, remembers his lover's moonlit skin as he watches his windblown angel prepare to jump.
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sad, death, suicide, moonlit, angels, skin, love, pete/patrick, windblown, pete, fairy's tales, fairytales, patrick/pete, patrick

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nalgene_sips September 5 2008, 23:41:32 UTC
beautifully written, OMG!

esp. this part rt. here:

I stared at you for hours on end, deciding if you really are an angel, whether the little delineation between my off white sheets and your skin was anomalous, and if we could ever capture the noises you moaned that night could be captured on an album.

you are so good with description and sensory details! ;D <3

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ginasfslove September 6 2008, 00:10:02 UTC
oh thank you so much! but i just realized an error right in that sentence. haha thanks for bringing that to my attention (im a bit of a perfectionist, i would have freaked if too many people read it with that). :] friend?

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nalgene_sips September 6 2008, 00:22:22 UTC
you're welcome (i hadn't even noticed the error, LOL you're smarter than i am ;D) <3!

and sure! *goes to add*

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ginasfslove September 6 2008, 00:41:22 UTC
*big smile*

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eyerenderingfan September 6 2008, 00:33:29 UTC
It was like poetry
your detail was beautiful
but the ending was sad

I loved how much emotion u pulled out of this

I am a fan of urs <3

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ginasfslove September 6 2008, 00:40:38 UTC
thankyouthankyouthankyou! that was so sweet of you. yeah, i was having a bit of an emo day so i decided to write the scenes ive had in my mind all day, came up with them in algebra class :] are we friends yet? cause if not, friend?

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eyerenderingfan September 6 2008, 00:50:52 UTC
I'm sure I said we must be friends after I read this
it was just that cool

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ginasfslove September 6 2008, 01:06:40 UTC
goddamn my face is gonna break from smiles

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tired_yawns September 6 2008, 01:21:18 UTC
wow. this my new ideal fanfic. *applauds*

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ginasfslove September 6 2008, 16:25:01 UTC
i applaud you for reading it, my dear. friend?

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tired_yawns September 6 2008, 18:49:53 UTC
of course.
btw what video is your journal entry from? I saw it once and them totally forgot about it :(

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ginasfslove September 6 2008, 18:59:13 UTC
what journal entry?

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hurtstoloveyou September 6 2008, 23:40:39 UTC
NO!
ut YES!
BUT NNOOOO!
ohgod i love it!

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ginasfslove September 7 2008, 14:14:15 UTC
thanks hun! you made my dayyy

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hurtstoloveyou September 7 2008, 20:54:41 UTC
you made mine :DDDDDDDDDDD

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ginasfslove September 9 2008, 11:02:20 UTC
i *squee*ed

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ashleyslash September 7 2008, 00:12:58 UTC
you made me cry!
:(

but it was well written.

but still...made me cry!

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ginasfslove September 7 2008, 14:14:40 UTC
well i hope the tears didnt last too long. you are too nice :]

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ginasfslove September 19 2008, 10:49:45 UTC
aw, i love you too :p

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