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gin200168

Fic: "Waters of Lethe" (Mac) PG (for psych_30)

Apr 06, 2006 23:20

Title: Waters of Lethe
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. Property of Jerry Bruckheimer, Alliance Atlantis, CBS, etc.
Summary: One can only resist for so long.
Warnings: Mildly disturbing images. Nothing major.
A/N: Something that just came to me randomly that I wrote down, showed stellaluna_ and she strongly encouraged me to actually post. Beta credit goes to ( Read more... )

rating: pg, csi : ny, psych_30, mac taylor, fic

Comments 11

stellaluna_ April 7 2006, 18:39:17 UTC

Thank you for listening to me and posting this. Poor Mac's psyche is such an uncomfortable place, and you capture that vividly here.

gin200168 April 9 2006, 05:50:13 UTC

I always have to listen to you. You'll poke me and lord knows what else until I do.

He is one messed up boy. His head is a very scary place, and those that try to venture into it (Danny, Stella, Jack) will definately not come out unscathed.

buffyangellvr23 April 7 2006, 19:02:52 UTC

*hugs Mac* That guy needs some serious comforting.

Nicely done.

gin200168 April 8 2006, 05:53:57 UTC

Thank you!

Yes, yes he does. Stella or Danny needs to be there when he wakes up to make it better. ;-)

ktkm April 7 2006, 23:13:29 UTC

Oh Mac... hugs.

gin200168 April 8 2006, 05:43:20 UTC

He does need some love, doesn't he?

slash_girl April 9 2006, 03:06:18 UTC

This is great! I like that even though it's short, the imagery is really well done.

Poor Mac needs Dannysomeone to help him sleep.

gin200168 April 9 2006, 05:17:53 UTC

Thanks!

And he so very needs Danny to help him sleep. Or Stella. Or Jack, in some sort of AU land. ;-)

scarletts_awry April 10 2006, 23:35:39 UTC

...okay, I started to describe this as lovely, then stopped...because that seems a, um, ironic choice of words...but it *is* lovely in the level of its distress and its terrible appropriateness to the prompt. The last line is such a punch in my gut.

gin200168 April 11 2006, 05:29:17 UTC

Thanks!

It really was some randomness that I didn't think much of until Stel practically freaked out on me and was like you ARE posting this... So its wonderful mesh with the prompt is totally coincidence.

Mac's head is a very messed up place, I assume. Especially when it runs away with itself.

I did like the offset of the last line-- the finality and toughness of it.