Comments | gin200168: Fic: "On the Clock" (Mac/Danny) PG (for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/coclaim100">coclaim100</a></strong>)

gin200168

Fic: "On the Clock" (Mac/Danny) PG (for coclaim100)

Nov 25, 2006 21:59

Fandom: CSI: NY
Title: On the Clock
Author: gin200168
Rating: PG for boykissing
Summary: Sometimes, you just can't wait.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Property of Jerry Bruckheimer, Alliance Atlantis, CBS, etc.
Pairing: Mac Taylor/Danny Messer
Prompt: #52-- Bending the Rules for coclaim100
A/N: Companion/prequel to stellaluna_'s "After Hours". Of course, she did all the fixing and ( Read more... )

slash, mac taylor/danny messer, coclaim100, rating: pg, csi : ny, fic

Comments 27

eviltwin November 26 2006, 18:54:16 UTC

Aww, how sweet! Danny did always strike me as the impulsive and impatient type ~L~ He'll loosen Mac up yet!

gin200168 November 26 2006, 21:01:43 UTC

Thanks. :-)

He is impulsive and impatient at times, and sometimes the outcome is good, others it's not. This time, it is. ;-) Mac just needs a push in the right direction is all.

druinsanity November 27 2006, 01:25:19 UTC

This was so cute. Nice work.

gin200168 November 27 2006, 01:36:19 UTC

Thanks! :-)

karaokegal November 27 2006, 20:38:44 UTC

My main fandom (House MD) is drowning a world of angst right now and even though I'm a total angst-bunny, this was a nice tonic. And an up-against-the-wall, Mac/Danny kiss is always welcome.

gin200168 November 28 2006, 07:17:27 UTC

Thanks. :-)

I used to be into House (I watched Hugh LONG ago in Blackadder before most of America knew who the heck he is) but haven't been following it.

My best friend, however, is a mod of a House comm and writes H/W. She keeps me updated on how the boys are, and she told me that they totally DESTROYED the ship, and that House is totally screwing over her Wilson. (and not in the good way.)

karaokegal November 29 2006, 00:44:04 UTC

"Destroyed" may be a bit strong, but H/W land is not the happiest place on earth right now, that's for sure. I'm about to attempt my first Mac/Danny story for a friend's X-mas/New Years request/challenge. Would you be willing to beta?

gin200168 November 29 2006, 02:01:40 UTC

Sure. I'm flattered that you'd ask.

I will warn you that I'm not exactly... kind. I'm honest, even if it's not quite what you want to hear. And I'm not the most technically skilled, but I'm learning fast-- my work with stellaluna_ has taught me a lot. She's noticed steady progress over time.

If you're still interested, let me know.

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samanthaowens November 27 2006, 23:21:03 UTC

I love your Mac and Danny stories.

gin200168 November 28 2006, 07:21:08 UTC

Thanks :-)

scarletts_awry December 4 2006, 00:31:07 UTC

*snicker* I love when Danny can bring out that... almost mischievous side that Mac has but tries to keep suppressed. It's so rare that I read something where Danny and Mac are being both in-character and cute, but it slays me every time.

(and it impresses me because i'm almost constitutionally incapable of writing "cute," which doesn't mean i don't enjoy it when i read good cute.)

Of course, the last line is made of win. :)

gin200168 December 4 2006, 20:46:06 UTC

Thanks. :-)

I don't necessarily set out for cute, but sometimes they do something and it turns out very cute. I often am very nervous about it, because cute often tends to lend itself to disasterous results, usually of the out of character kind. And writing them OOC is often a paranoia of mine.

(and it impresses me because i'm almost constitutionally incapable of writing "cute," which doesn't mean i don't enjoy it when i read good cute.)

Awwwww thanks. I generally don't see myself as impressive (although people have been slowly changing that opinion at times) and I don't have the capacity like you and Stel do to write them angry/fucked up/broken, so I guess it evens out.

Of course, the last line is made of win. :)

heeeeeeee. She'd be all over him! And knowing her, quite possibly poking him for details just to be gleefully entertained as he flailed.