Nocturne ~ Chapter Four

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Title: Nocturne
Chapters: 4/?
Author: Jenluvskat
Fandom: SNSD, After School, Various other kpop groups/singers
Genre: Supernatural, drama, action, romance
Rating: R
Pairing(s): Jessica/Tiffany, Hyoyeon/Sunny, others
Author's Note: I meant to post this earlier but I got caught up with a lot of things D: I hate having Sunday be practically my free

Comments

[inuvampy]

I really like this chapter :O Even with no JeNy in it Dx NEXT TIIIIMMMEEE~~

All the fighting and excitment really gets you to want to continue reading forever~ It was beautiful~

HAEHYUK AGAIIIINNN 8D

I'm glad Kahi got to see the HyoSun love. She needs to be more open about this :[ And lol and all the gossiping Werewolves Kahi had to deal with xD

Next Chapter!!

[ishfeeny]

Whoo update!

Love protective!Hyoyeon, although I must say, I'm curious as to how connected she is with Sunny to be able to sense that her princess is in danger.

And Jungah! I'm just WAITING for her to like, default to the werewolves or something. I want to see Jungah/Kahi interaction haha. And I'm curious as to how good Jungah's skills really are, so I'm looking forward to a showdown between her and Hanryul too (who I really, really don't like haha).

I hope you can update soon! Keep writing, fighting!

Werewolf action ftw!!!

[cocokittystar]

Okay, your fic is officially BADASS! I totally fell into reading the part where Hyoyeon beats those vampires' asses to save Sunny! Woah......so cool! It felt like it was real!

I wonder what Hyo would look like in werewolf form.....it must be fun being a werewolf, despite the pain you'd have to go through with transforming.

Jungah is sick! She really wants Sunny to be happy doesn't she? Kinda sucks that she has to pretend to hate werewolves though.

I really wanna punch that stupid Hanryul! >=( He's gotta learn to shutup and be the messenger that he is. And I really doubt he'll be better than Jungah, cause by the sounds of it she probably is really REALLY powerful.

Keep going! You're jjang~

[soultoseoul]

I'm commenting ~~~~~~ :D

I'm loving the action in this chapter! :D
The fight was awesome ~ :DDDD

I'm glad all the werewolves seem to be respecting the HyoSun relationship so far ~ and that the vampires got their butts kicked in the fight.. ohoho :3

But gahh.. that HanRyul is pissing me off D:

Jungah! <333
I'm guessing I'll get to see her in action with all her skills in the future.. but likely fighting on the werewolf side?? :D?
And it's cool that she can disappear! xD
*ends Jungah spaz* - she's super cool in this fic XD

All in all.. this was an exciting chapter! :D

I'll be more efficient in reading and commenting on the next chapter. :)

[driftaway143]

Read it all
Too tired to give a proper comment
Can't wait for the next chapter =)