Tomorrow's Ghost

[gilpins_tales]

Title: Tomorrow’s Ghost
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating & warnings: R for language and sexual implications.
Word Count: 7995
Summary: A moment frozen in time when Sirius can see the bond of brotherhood between them like a tangible, living thing. See the trust there in each other, and because of that in themselves, which is surely so strong and

Comments

[glynngriffiths]

That was really well done - I enjoyed the straddling of two times, which you managed without making it seem frenzied, and you did a fantastic job of situating Sirius on both sides of that divide. And I loved the interactions with him and Remus, and the careful, subtle way you showed the insidious doubts as they came to him. And that Tonks called him on his awful pick-up line! (Even though it's angsty, you always need some comic relief.)

The final line, though, is wonderful - powerful. Definitely five (plus) whiskies stuff. :) Thanks for sharing this.

[gilpins_tales]

Thank you very much for such lovely comments - especially as yesterday really was one of those days, so to turn on the computer and find this was a far nicer end to it