Comments | gildedmuse: Fic: Bedtime Stories for Bohemians

gildedmuse

Fic: Bedtime Stories for Bohemians

Feb 05, 2007 20:07

Author: Stephanie
Title: Bedtime Stories for Bohemians
Chapter: The Princess and The Marxist
Characters/Pairings: Roger/April, Mark/Roger/April (sort of)
Rating: Pg-13
Word Count: 2,870
Summary: April, Roger, and Mark are laying around, trying to fight off the cold when April incites Mark to tell them a fairy tale.

( The Princess and The Marxist )

post: fanfiction, fandom: rent

Comments 9

slant_truth February 6 2007, 02:09:31 UTC

This is made of awesome. And so much yay for that bit of Marcello and Rodolfo in there. Great job.

gildedmuse February 6 2007, 20:59:51 UTC

^^ Well, thanks. Glad someone got that.

brightlit_city February 6 2007, 22:55:25 UTC

:D
You're writing always makes me happy.

gildedmuse February 8 2007, 16:00:33 UTC

^^ I'm glad.

formerlydf February 7 2007, 02:00:36 UTC

Okay, so the fact that you wrote this would make it amazing in any case, but the whole "fairytale/bedtime story" theme is just the icing on the cake. I've wanted someone to write Rent as a fairytale for so long, you have no idea.

...Yes, seriously.

Anyway, this was super-amazing-incredible, although I felt kind of bad for Mark. *hugs him* The whole "he has no one" thing, and how he's accepted but still separate. And then how they fall asleep without him. I really hate it when stuff like that happens. *makes face*

But! I loved your characterisation-April having a sister and this April doesn't talk about herself much, just about things she's doing or going to do, never backwards. was really cool, because it gave a little insight into April. Oh, and the "brother named June" thing made me giggle ( ... )

gildedmuse February 8 2007, 16:02:56 UTC

Ha. Your review is almost as long as the fic itself. I like that. ^^ It helps my day, what with the computer crashing and all. Which brings me to the point that this reply would be longer if I weren't using a school computer during class.

And I don't think you can ever be too analytical, so don't worry about it.

formerlydf February 9 2007, 01:56:39 UTC

*blushes* Well, I tried to be concise, but then I just kept on thinking, "But there's so much more to say!" and then... Well, you can see the results. (The best, though, is when someone writes a drabble and I write a review that's about twice as long. Just for the sheer ridiculousness of the situation. *grins*)

Oh noe! Computer crashes are an existential bane. Along with writer's block. And hey, it's cool; I'm used to replies being a heckuva lot shorter than my review. (And I just used the word heckuva in a sentence. Wow. *shakes head*)

Oh, goody. And thank you. *laughs*

~DF

PS. Your icon wins, just for the sheer awesomeness of that movie.

libriscum February 7 2007, 04:17:46 UTC

Please tell me Roger isn't groaning for his Fender in his sleep, because that... would just be gold.

gildedmuse February 8 2007, 16:03:59 UTC

Eeh.. He was originally but then I changed it to sound more like a sleep groan.