Fic: Flicker, Flash, and Fade

[gildedmuse]

So, this is an idea I have been playing around with for a while. I finally wrote some of it down, and I was wondering what you all thought. I think it may possibly be too odd for a rent fic, but I really like it and wanted to at least give it a shot. So if anyone would like to, they could make my day by reading it and giving some feedback on if it'

Comments

[shadow_mage]

This is a great start. Different concept for Rent, but I like it. I love the on-running thoughts of both of them. It makes it even more powerful, more emotional. In all honesty, I was teary for most parts.

I say keep going. :)

[gildedmuse]

Hopefully despite the weird concept in terms of Rent, I can manage to stay in character (and keep up the flashbacks. Ick.)

[cdvla313]

I really like the style of writing. It is rather unusual for rent fic, but I think it's definately worth continuing. It made me kinda depressed, but in the best possible way. If that makes sense. Great start!

[gildedmuse]

Depressed but in the best possible way... I can work with that.

[anime_fanatic19]

this is such an intriguing story! i love it.

[gildedmuse]

^^ Thanks

[happygirl16]

hi. i'm borderline obsessed with this story.
so lovely.
thanks!
happy new year!

[gildedmuse]

Thank you. And (Belated) Happy New Year!

[varymydays]

Wow, fantastic

[gildedmuse]

You know, I'm calling it the Roger's Coma parts, so coma-world works just as well.

And let's hope you like the flashbacks, because as planned the fic will probably be 25% flash backs, 25% hospitals, 25% fucked up coma world, and 25% angst: other. I get to have fun coming up with a hundred different things for Mark and Roger to think back on and hate their lives for, because that is the sort of writer I am. The kind that apparently hates the characters and wants them to suffer for it. ^^