FRAGMENTED - Fragment 8, Part 3

Nov 09, 2010 20:21



-Wednesday, January 17th 2007

- 3:32 am

Open, close, open, close.

The hinge of that damnable cell phone creaked in protest as leather bound fingers moved, manipulating the small device.

Open, close, open, close.

Over and over and over again.

It was mocking, terrifying even; churning unease in his innards like ( Read more... )

length: chaptered, type: fanfiction, genre: angst, rating: r, genre: horror, genre: thriller, title: fragmented, genre: suspense

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ah_mui November 10 2010, 06:08:22 UTC
thanks for the update! this is definitely one of my favourite stories, it's riveting. the girl next to yunho, is she the one who helped jae escape? i hope so! and i hope yosuke has some conscience to help jae. good luck for the future chapters!

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gildeddiscourse January 2 2011, 12:53:07 UTC
You are most welcome for the update. I am so sorry for all the delays in posting. Thank YOU so much for reading and sticking with me and commenting. I really appreciate it. I am so incredibly flattered that you think so highly of this piece, that really makes my day ^_^

As for the child. Its possible. The only way to know is to stay tuned and keep reading the future updates ^_^

Lol I hope he does too. Jaejoong really needs a friend. T_T Poor thing.

Thank you sooo much! And Happy New Year!

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hyukie23 November 10 2010, 06:39:31 UTC
thank you for updating... really enjoy reading this story, n thank u 4 coming back ^^..

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gildeddiscourse January 2 2011, 12:37:46 UTC
You're welcome! Thank YOU so much for reading and commenting and THANK YOU for sticking with me despite all the delays in posting updates. It mean's a lot to me ^_^

Oh and Happy New Year!

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dilovesyunjae November 10 2010, 06:41:59 UTC
oh my god....this is just soo.gahhhhh.eien should be tortured the same way for ETERNITY!!!

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gildeddiscourse January 2 2011, 12:38:49 UTC
XD I agree. He really should be. The man has some serious issues -_- Poor Jaejoong.

Thank you so much for reading and thank you for commenting! I really appreciate it ^^

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gildeddiscourse January 2 2011, 12:39:46 UTC
I know. The poor thing. I feel so bad for him. He has no idea whats going in the outside world -_- poor Jaejoongie -hugs-

I will try! Thank you so much for reading and commenting I really appreciate it ^^

Happy New Year.

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haru_ran November 10 2010, 08:39:40 UTC
Unnieeeeeeeeeeeee~ you're here and I'm fail~ I'm still stuck with reading chapter 6~ D'8

I'll come back to you when I'm in the need for some bloody stuff. *-*

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gildeddiscourse January 2 2011, 13:02:03 UTC
Aww! Thats ok silly. ^^ I know this isn't a piece you can just read whenever if your not in the mood for some violence or angst lol No worries hun ^_^

I'm just glad to hear from you silly ^_^

Happy New Years! -hug-

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haru_ran January 2 2011, 13:09:53 UTC
Indeed~ 8'D

Same here~ I'm glad you're trying to be more around again. I missed you~ ;~; &hearts

Happy New Year to you as well~ /hugs back

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gildeddiscourse January 2 2011, 13:19:25 UTC
Dawww! I missed you too! -hugs- I'm sorry for being gone so much. I managed to rig up my old crappy dying pc to the internet. So I can at least get on now and then. But its by no means safe nor constant. But oh well. Lol Its something. <3 -hug- Hopefully I can be on more. I miss talking to you ^_^

Aww! Hope you had a great one dear ^^

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