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sassychicks April 12 2010, 14:16:25 UTC
SPOT!! :D

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gildeddiscourse April 12 2010, 14:58:37 UTC
O.O wow. You're fast.

All yours dear ^^

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sassychicks April 12 2010, 15:04:11 UTC
OMG!!
This part...made..me shivering...
OMG..suddenly my eyes are hurts, I can feel Jaejae pain...no...jaejae..hang on there...Yunnie will save you...

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gildeddiscourse April 16 2010, 13:58:47 UTC
Awww! -hugs- I'm sorry hun. I'm glad you can get into it so much that you sympathize so much with poor Jaejoong. I feel so bad hurting them T__T Yes Yunnie, hurry and save Jaejoong.

As always, thank you so much for reading and commenting dear <3

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gildeddiscourse April 16 2010, 14:02:47 UTC
Aww ^//^ Thats so sweet of you hun. I'm glad your enjoying this story so much!

You can never read too much <3 Ever <3 -nodnod- But that is an incredible complement. Thank you so much hun. I'm really glad your so in to it. I'm sorry you hurt though -_- -hug-

Aww <333 Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

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muffarino April 15 2010, 01:06:07 UTC
SPOT! I'll be back soon, promise. ^^

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muffarino April 15 2010, 02:01:44 UTC
I'm amazed at how great your writing is, it makes me feel like I'm part of this too, it's like I can feel Jaejoong and the band's pain.

Jaejoong's going through so much pain but he still keeps his pride. One of my favourite lines was "he could not help but feel a hint of pride at his hyung’s strength and determination to protect them."
It makes me feel proud of him too and I can tell that the band really loves Jaejoong.

Poor Joongie's still hurt! But at least that physician cares for him...somewhat.

Thanks for updating. I'll go read the second part now.

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gildeddiscourse April 16 2010, 14:09:10 UTC
Oh wow. O///O Thank you so much dear. Thats an amazing complement. I'm so flattered. ^///^ I'm really glad your enjoying this little story so much. Thats incredibly sweet of you to say. Its an amazing thing being able to connect with a reader on an emotional level and I'm just shocked and incredibly thankful <3333 So thank you so much dear.

Yes, poor Jaejoong is going through a lot. But he's still Jaejoong. He's strong, stronger than anyone ever gives him credit for and thats what I want my readers to see. His strength. Their strength and their love for one another. I'm really glad you can feel their bond. And I'm VERY glad your proud of him. The whole reason I started this story was to showcase their strength and love and sort of pay respect to it <3333 ( ... )

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jaerin17 May 8 2010, 14:49:56 UTC
This... this... this... is... too much... I can't take this anymore... That stupid sick bastard should feel all the pain he's giving Jaejoong before he burns in hell..! *cries hard*

Jaejoong is suffering so much and he's enduring everything for the sake of his band mates. Please... Save him now... Save him... I'm getting scared on what that Eien bastard will do to him... Submit to him??? NO WAY YOU..! Argg... *cries in pain*

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gildeddiscourse May 20 2010, 14:14:44 UTC
Aww -hugs- I'm so sorry hun -_- -gives a tissue- Eien rally does deserve that doesn't he? I hope he gets it and more for being so evil to the boys -_-;;;

-gives a whole box of tissues- I'm sorry T_T Hopefully they boys / detectives will save him soon. You'll have to keep reading to find out. >.<

Thank you so much for reading and thank you for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it <3 It mean's a lot to me.

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