Comments | giinnnzz: SECOND smut!! XD

giinnnzz

SECOND smut!! XD

Jun 14, 2009 21:14

Title: Let me eat you

Rating: NC-17/Smut

Couple: Kyuwook, Yewook, slight Teukwook word count: 2121
Summary: Kyuhyun let Ryeowook to "eat" him..
A/N: I made this as my second smut.. It's long and lot's of wrong grammar.. (sorry..~~) Please comment on it coz I want to know about my skill in writing smut. Hope you'll enjoy it.. XD

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teukwook, fanfic, kyuwook, yewook

Comments 34

jishu June 15 2009, 12:01:10 UTC

hot~ ^_^

giinnnzz June 15 2009, 12:08:45 UTC

thanks for read it XD

jishu June 21 2009, 14:20:54 UTC

looks like I've read this too... hahahaha XD

giinnnzz June 21 2009, 14:23:09 UTC

wahahah.. feel free to read it many times as you want, honey.. XD

shiki0014 June 15 2009, 13:22:44 UTC

I SIMPLY LOVE THIS xDDD
hooot~ all hooray for kyuwook!! xDD

giinnnzz June 15 2009, 13:28:51 UTC

thanx for read it!! XD feel free to read the other one XD

anonymous June 15 2009, 15:28:58 UTC

Mwaha!
This was so cute, funny && HOOOOOOOT!
I laughed when Ryeowook was thinking that Kangin's dick was bigger than Kyuhyun's xD
Poor Kyuhyun at first. The only one that wasn't a vampire.
And Yesung, LOL. So horny xD
I love when Yesung was about to like.. Rape Ryeowook and Leeteuk just comes in and glares at him, hahaha! LMFAO!
When you said "eat", I though eat as in EAT like the way you eat food. But when I found out eating was actually.. Sex, I LOVED IT XDDD
I LOVE THIS!
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"Don't worry.. I love you too.. I love your cute nipples, I love your sensitive skins and.. I love your cum.."

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That line was so cute, yet dirty!
I LOVE THIS , IT'S HOT!
♥

cutelittlebows June 15 2009, 15:30:27 UTC

Crap! That was the first time I posted as anonymous!
ACK! Sorry~
♥

giinnnzz June 16 2009, 01:41:01 UTC

thank you for read it XD.. I thought it was crappy coz I dunno about what people think about this fic ~~ thank you!! i love your comment XD it build me some courage to make more~~ hahaaha.. I also has another fics.. feel free to read XD

leunah23 June 15 2009, 16:25:01 UTC

*fanning myself* hot!

giinnnzz June 16 2009, 01:46:48 UTC

thank you for read it XD..
wahahahahaa... (*happy..)

shaniskara June 15 2009, 16:55:57 UTC

i knew it!!!
they're vampire!!! mwahahahahaaha xDDD
so, that's why they look as hot as this fic *smirk*

giinnnzz June 16 2009, 01:48:47 UTC

thanx for read it!! XD
wahaahhaha.. I'm trying to relieve my boredom of my series by making smut.. Is it good?? I'm glad that you like it!! XD