Comments | gigi42: Natural Selection 11c/24

gigi42

Natural Selection 11c/24

Jan 30, 2014 18:10

Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: AU
Pairings: Burt/Kurt, Kurt/dogs, Kurt/OCs, Burt/OC
Warnings: Non-con, Incest, Bestiality, B!P, Daddy Kink, Innocence
Additional warnings for this chapter: Discussion of mpreg, medical kink, cross dressing,purposeful misgendering, exhibitionism, voyeurism, double penetration, blink-and-you-miss-it somnophilia, blink-and-you ( Read more... )

hummelcest, media: fanfic, daddy!kink, cross dressing, nc-17, length: series, puckurt, incest, gkm fill, glee: natural selection, genre: smut

Comments 11

anonymous January 30 2014, 15:18:31 UTC

*spoiler*

Adding Noah was perfect! Damn Kurt 3 diff cocks the same day & double pen. Special place in hell my friend!

gigi42 February 1 2014, 05:13:04 UTC

I always love a bit of Puckurt so I wanted to include him. I also love that Puck wants Kitty all to himself too.

anonymous January 30 2014, 17:29:05 UTC

Well.....that was fun :') I seriously love this story! Noah was AMAZINGG I love him and the return of Dr Cooper was super hot! It's my shameless kink of everyone wanting Kurt so the men in the bar and the boys in the diner were super awesome! I'd love more stuff like that! Burt didn't sit well with me in this chapter it was still brilliant writing on your behalf but he just creeped me out! I liked the addition on Unique too :) I definitely am hoping that Kurt does distance himself from Burt at least at the end of the story and I would love to see kurt exclusive with someone and from your ven diagram maybe that is your thought process ;) I would absolutely lovelovelove to see Kurt with Sebastian! That is after all my otp! Thank you so much for the update I was getting slightly worried! <3

gigi42 February 1 2014, 05:16:01 UTC

Thank you. Yes, Burt was supposed to be creepy here. I cut two scenes that dealt with Burt's anger and disappointment but needless to say, Burt's a mess. He doesn't know if he's a boyfriend or a father right now and he doesn't have anyone to talk to about it.

Ultimately this is Kurt's story and we'll see Kurt fall in love somewhere along the line.

nillepille January 31 2014, 02:14:45 UTC

Great chapter.

As everyone else has said, great job with adding Puck.

Drunk, creepy Burt was a bit off-putting, but I suppose that is what we get for Burt getting drunk.

I liked the threesome.

I am trying to figure out how Burt is going to get the dogs to take curt in the ass.

Thanks for the update.

gigi42 February 1 2014, 05:17:40 UTC

Puck for the win today. :)

Yes, Burt is a mess. Adults makes mistakes too. We'll see him work through some of his stuff soon and the return of the dogs.

HOT!!! anonymous January 31 2014, 04:34:37 UTC

Okay, so this might have been the first time I ever read a double penetration thing, and you made it sound really hot!

I really loved this, but I'm not liking Burt to much, at least not drunk Burt lol.

Can't wait for more, I really want to know how Kurt will meet Blaine or maybe Sebastian, oh David K...which ever, I don't really mind, just as long as this ends with Romance "love".

Re: HOT!!! gigi42 February 1 2014, 05:19:54 UTC

DP is always fun to read but hella difficult to write with everyone moving all the time, lol.

I always aim for a happy ending and this story is no exception. :)

nymeriasaisword January 31 2014, 13:07:01 UTC

Wow,just wow. This chapter was amazing and really, really hot. And all the Kitty part is so twisted that it's amazing. I don't know why, but I have the feeling Kurt is gonna have a lot of problems with Burt and it's not gonna be pretty.

gigi42 February 1 2014, 05:18:47 UTC

The Kitty/Kurt part was supposed to be twisted and I'm glad you weren't completely put off - I was nervous about the whole thing! They'll work things out one way or another...