Chapter 3: Wherein *Jensen* Decides that Jared Is a Private Detective

Apr 29, 2010 14:41



A Scene of Interrupted Domestic Bliss, Occurring Christmas, in the Actual Bona Fide Morning

Jared lined up the enemy in his sights and exhaled slowly while he squeezed the trigger. The balloon on the tree made an extremely satisfying popping noise. Jared chuckled and set to reloading the antique dueling pistol Jensen had gotten him ( Read more... )

fanfic, murder and martinis

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weesta April 29 2010, 22:54:06 UTC
They were also well aware of the dashing picture they made in their matching gray suits and fedoras.

Mmmm....yummy. We need a flashback episode and get boys in suits and fedoras walking in tandem. This might be my new happy place.

Jared and Jensen looked at each other, and Jared squeezed his husband's hand to indicate they should be forgiving on Christmas, - especially to tall detectives who looked like candy.

And another happy place.

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gigglingkat May 1 2010, 23:38:40 UTC
yes, I am saddened that fashion has loss the sense of "American Elegance" and make our menfolk dressy. But I would never have the patience for 40s era female fashion, so I guess it's a fair trade! ;)

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madame_d May 1 2010, 23:45:10 UTC
I'm absolutely loving it. The witty, clever narrative, snarky and tongue-in-cheek, is fantastic! Jared looking for elves, and Jensen knowing he's looking for elves - clearly, they're MFEO! And mmm, eye candy law enforcement officers. And Jared admitting to San Francisco call before such because the best course of action was disclosure in front of an armed member of law enforcement.

Just. GLEE! &hearts x bazillionty. Also, WORD on Milo being creepy.

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gigglingkat May 2 2010, 01:46:48 UTC
Yes, they are the perfect couple in keeping with the source material. Apparently when I think "perfect couple" this is what I get. As I'm a straight girl, it's a little sad, actually. ;P

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madame_d May 2 2010, 05:52:18 UTC
Apparently when I think "perfect couple" this is what I get. As I'm a straight girl, it's a little sad, actually. ;P

Pfft. Straight guys love lesbian porn. As straight girls, we're allowed to return the favour. :D

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