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Apr 02, 2007 01:25

Second sidestory for rayemars' whorehouse AU (with consent from the author), 9 to 5 Grind, which you can find here. Detailing an incident which is never completely explained in 9 to 5 Grind's last section. A few yakuza terms are used in this fic, but their meaning is pretty much implied in the context, so there shouldn't be any problems. This was ( Read more... )

sound, 9 to 5 grind yakuza sidestory, sannin

Comments 7

monique_27 April 2 2007, 07:25:01 UTC

...I am incoherent. This is amazing and smart and funny and well-written, and Tsunade...incoherent, I tell you. *>.<*

I promise an awesome review when I get some sleep...after I read this one more time. *^.^*

Vale!

~ Monique ~

gigabomb April 3 2007, 17:25:40 UTC

Heh, glad you liked it. Rayemars created a great universe to play around in. Tsunade was originally way more sappy, but thankfully I rewrote that part.

rachel_smachel April 3 2007, 04:58:12 UTC

Neat little fic, I love how it fills in the blanks. Plus it has Kidoumaru, and I do adore your Kidoumaru.

...but for some reason now I have this crack plot bunny floating around in my head where this AU meets your "A Fox and Shark Walk into a Bar" AU where Reiko's Akastuki is now a drag queen show club. Really shouldn't have watched, "Priscilla: Queen of the Desert" before reading this...

gigabomb April 3 2007, 17:28:42 UTC

I couldn't miss the chance to wrote Kidoumaru as a yakuza accountant, but then this universe tends to have that effect on me.

... that would be weird. Also, the dynamics between characters in whore-verse is not exactly the same as it is in canon (i.e. Itachi is still with his clan working as a cop, Kakashi isn't even in the picture, etc). However... hmm... actually, I'd see Reiko as a prostitution ring rival to Jiraiya, the kind of rival where after drinks they have lots of kinky sex and steal files off each other's hard drives. Heh.

rachel_smachel April 3 2007, 21:27:06 UTC

Yeah, like I said: pure crack. I can see how the dynamics don't quite add up right too. Reiko rivalling Jiraiya would be awesome however, it reminds me of "And the Toad Said What?".

monoshiri April 14 2007, 15:29:42 UTC

I...

...I have no words. Only squee. It's that awesome.

...yakuza accountant. *dies happy*

gigabomb April 15 2007, 20:54:38 UTC

For the sake of sheer irony, the Kidoumaru in this universe wears contacts and can't shoot a gun. At all. Kind of pathetic, but then, he's the only one who went to grad school, so he's fine with that.