writing (but don’t tell anyone)

Jun 03, 2009 17:31

so i started writing this frank-centric thing, right? and i was totally going to keep quiet about it and probably never show it to anyone because it will likely turn out badly, but then i thought of something. instead of giving me a thumbs up or a thumbs down, how about telling me where you think this fic might go or where you think it should go? ( Read more... )

my chemical romance, mcr, frank iero, fic, writing

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silentdescant June 3 2009, 22:13:57 UTC
ahh! that first part about Jamia made my heart seize up a bit. and Ray's t-shirt. poor Frank. :( :( :(

I...... have no idea where you're heading with this, actually, 'cause I can think of several different ways it could go. I'm hoping Frank does something with his guitar, though, because MUSIC = HAPPY FRANK. (and I don't really want to say GEE, GO SAVE HIM FROM THE ANGST! because he's all happy and domestic-ish and everything!)

I want moooooooore.

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giddy_london June 3 2009, 23:22:38 UTC
oh, dude. i know. i KNOW. frank ( ... )

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silentdescant June 4 2009, 05:54:50 UTC
oh fraaaaank. POOR BB.

*wants moooooore*

it's just so gooooood, gids.

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 16:19:51 UTC
objectively good or biased opinion good?

also, there might be more later. i'm feeling pretty okay about what i wrote yesterday, but i'm nervous about where it's going.

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gothvader June 3 2009, 22:37:29 UTC
-goes to read-
-flails-

this is just ngh.
as for where you should go with it, well.. i'm still a bit &___& over the image of frank in bearly there jeans mowing the lawn.

oh & your icon ♥

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giddy_london June 3 2009, 23:24:40 UTC
well, a boy's gotta earn his keep when he goes back home to live with mama, right? i think mowing the lawn is the least he could do!

hee. i have a lot of frank icons...

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gothvader June 3 2009, 23:32:44 UTC
oh hellz yes.

and again, with the icon.
he's far too pretty.

i'm just thinking, i'd pretty much like to see some asshole!hothead!frank

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 01:44:43 UTC
although asshole!frank is one of my very favorite franks ever, i don't know whether this frank is asshole!frank. i think he probably can be, once in a while, but generally speaking, not so much.

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 01:46:38 UTC
the jamia part made me pretty D: as well, but it's pretty central to the plot of this particular fic, so it kind of had to happen. it's definitely going somewhere, though, as i've already got about a thousand more words of it.

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 16:21:38 UTC
might be more up later today. i'm pretty pleased with what i wrote yesterday.

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morebliss June 4 2009, 05:35:02 UTC
The first sentence got me all excited, and then it got all sad :(

frank is not going to cry, cut himself, acquire an eating disorder, or kill himself,

Well, shit dude, then I got nothing.

Maybe Bob can come over and be all, come to the gigs I am doing sound for, watch me be all capable and shit, here's a guitar - go jam, is that an erection?, hand me that wire, oh whoops my shirt came off, let's fuck.

But, you have to finish it, 'cause it's great and YOU HAVE TO FIX HIM!

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 16:23:06 UTC
Maybe Bob can come over and be all, come to the gigs I am doing sound for, watch me be all capable and shit, here's a guitar - go jam, is that an erection?, hand me that wire, oh whoops my shirt came off, let's fuck.

NONE OF THESE ARE BAD IDEAS.

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morebliss June 4 2009, 23:42:20 UTC
:D BOB FIXES ALL.

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 23:52:05 UTC
you are making me consider taking this in a direction i hadn't thought about...

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gemmi999 June 4 2009, 13:40:37 UTC
Awwwww! I read the Jamia part and I was like oO but then you made it all non-hostile and that's good, but still! I can't imagine Frank w/out his Jamia. Even though she's not really his and is her own person and everything.

And then read about his day and the motions he's going through. and BANDIT! Eeee! and okay, so I have nothing coherent to say but A+ and you'd better continue this b/c Frank needs to get over his depression and maybe sleepwithgerardandlyn-z and yes! Threesome's ftw?

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 16:27:00 UTC
i am weirdly okay with frank and jamia breaking up in fic so long as they never break up irl because they need to be together always and have lots of babies and things.

hee! i will admit that a threesome with gerard and lindsey crossed my mind, but this frank and gerard don't do those things, i don't think. there might be a different threesome later, though...

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silentdescant June 4 2009, 17:57:40 UTC
there might be a different threesome later, though...

mikey and alicia are probably always up for a threesome in any universe! heee.

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giddy_london June 4 2009, 18:50:14 UTC
nope. definitely not a mikey and alicia and frank threesome. that thought never crossed my mind, tbh. although it is a really nice visual, and not something i've ever read, i don't think.

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