BS:Gen:PG-13: Sometimes

Nov 06, 2008 05:07

Title:Sometimes
Author: gibson_fic
Recipient: For mrsquizzical
Fandom: Bandslash, Fall Out Boy
Characters: Pete, Patrick
Rating: PG-13 for language
Author's Notes: This is an unbetad, gift ficlet as part of a prompted writing meme. So tell me if you spot anything, k?
Disclaimer: This did not, to the best of my knowledge, happen. This is a fictional story about ( Read more... )

rating: pg13, bandslash: fall out boy, fandom: bandslash, gen, pairing: pete/patrick

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mrsquizzical November 6 2008, 10:47:59 UTC
perfect!

i love how patrick was sort of uncomfortable with his thought process and edging away from it, but then finding himself thinking it anyway.

and yeah. no pete means no joe. no andy. that's so many different kinds of sad right there.

lovely.

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gibson_fic November 6 2008, 10:57:48 UTC
:D

I'm glad you like it. I doubt it's what you had in mind, but it's what he gave me.

And, yeah, no Joe and Andy, no Pete, those are very, very sad things that we really shouldn't contemplate. :(

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asimplechord November 6 2008, 13:39:42 UTC
:) This is a lovely, thoughtful look at the way their lives are entwined.

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gibson_fic November 7 2008, 02:20:20 UTC
Thank you. :D

I looked at that prompt and there was just no way I could see Patrick without Pete. Maybe that's just my prejudices showing. ;)

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redsnake05 November 6 2008, 17:59:05 UTC
I loved the way Patrick edged round the important bits, but couldn't get away from them at all. And the last image was magic.

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gibson_fic November 7 2008, 02:18:34 UTC
Thank you :D.

I almost regret posting it now because on the way home I was thinking of ways to flesh it out some more. Bah.

Still, there's my Patrick--he's a rambler.

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mrsquizzical November 7 2008, 06:30:09 UTC
hey i'm happy to read updated versions. :~D you could always email it to me if you felt uncomfortable posting again. you know, just if you wanted to get it out of your head. no pressure!!!

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gibson_fic November 7 2008, 10:44:22 UTC
I've actually revamped it just a touch now. ;)

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