"Time" Chapter Five - Good Intentions

Feb 19, 2008 21:37


"Time" - Chapter Five - Good Intentions

Rating: PG-13

Characters: Pairings: Callie/OC, Mark/Cristina, Cristina/Mark/Callie friendship

Description: Callie discovers something new about her friends, and a pool pump is something people should not be denied too often.

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Time” - Chapter Five - “Good Intentions”

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obi_kim February 20 2008, 02:53:53 UTC
OOooh! YAY! It's back!

Oh James, he had no idea what he was walking in on! He cracks me up, just being all "they were going at it, and how bout them Yanks?" Word!

I think that was actually the best way to do it, because I think Callie would be in the fetal position right now if SHE had caught them.

So, you finally wrote the Marina... But what does it MEAN? :D OH, the dark side, it's interesting.

YAY GIB!

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gibraltariana February 20 2008, 03:16:19 UTC
Hee! Thanks. The hold up was pretty much HOW the whole Mark and Cristina thing would come out, and I figured James would be the easiest way to go. Glad you found it funny.

As far as Marina, there's more coming (bah dum bump!).

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vietangel80 February 20 2008, 04:14:33 UTC
“Yes. I figured it had to be good when I heard you screaming in Spanish.” - That's the Cristina I know and love...hilariously inappropriate with the comments.

Poor oblivious James, he has no idea what he's getting himself into with those three. I seriously like that guy for Callie though. I can't wait to see where things will go with Cristina and Mark.

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gibraltariana February 20 2008, 19:39:58 UTC
Glad you liked it. Yes, James is going to catch on to the dysfunction of Seattle Grace. Trust me, I made him a psychiatrist for a reason!

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swedishgafan February 20 2008, 12:32:29 UTC
Yaaaaay! I've been looking forward to this chapter for the longest time girlie! And man, did you deliver! :D
This was great Gib, I loved it! :D You write them all so well, Callie, Cristina, Mark - I can totally see and hear them. And James just Callie's real McDreamy. :) Love him!
Can't wait to read next chapter girlie. :D

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gibraltariana February 20 2008, 19:41:23 UTC
I am so glad people seem to be liking James. I kind of modeled him as a combination of men that I know, mostly my husband.

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tv_junkie118 February 22 2008, 02:46:49 UTC
“Actually, I have to apologize. I didn’t mean to walk in on you two."

OMG that had to be soo funny.

“You did Sloan?” I asked, “In MY house you did Sloan!”... The whole Callie/Cris exchange was great.

“Yes. I figured it had to be good when I heard you screaming in Spanish.” ... Perfect line for the perfect ending.

Can't wait to see what happens with these four.

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gibraltariana February 22 2008, 04:23:32 UTC
Thanks for the review. I would have loved for us to see more of Cristina and Callie's interaction on the show, but I am glad to see her have some friends at the Big Kids Table.

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