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Fic: Sin of Passion

Aug 06, 2010 00:17

Title: Sin of Passion ( Read more... )

Comments 8

georgiesmith August 6 2010, 00:46:00 UTC

That was marvelous! You tied it all together beautifully!

I'm so glad I found this through the ncis_newsletter.

ghosts_writer August 6 2010, 12:31:09 UTC

thank you.

ex_hellesof August 6 2010, 00:49:46 UTC

I thought it read coherently and fluidly. A lovely story. I liked the way it showed Tony's thought process and I loved the last line.

ghosts_writer August 6 2010, 12:31:45 UTC

thanks, I'm German so I'm never completely sure about the grammar. I'm glad you liked it.

murgy31 August 6 2010, 01:39:53 UTC

This was great!

singer_s_lament August 6 2010, 03:07:30 UTC

I really liked it.

tingreca August 6 2010, 16:17:40 UTC

Very well done. I did notice the German-ness, but ... well, if I tried to write something in German ... well, I'd never even try. How silly mine would be! Sometimes, I just get by in 'American' !!!

Yes. i was impressed.