Ooh, so that's your "short story" version of the dream? So you're just leaving the identity of the victim open-ended-- a mutual friend? I should really write mine; it had quite a different twist.
I am strongly tempted to severely redecorate your room. I'm talking paint, curtains, linens *on* the bed, some nice pictures on the wall...
Well, I thought about hinting at the identity throughout the story and maybe at the ending- maybe the narrator or his friend. Which, with my brain as it is, wouldn't likely be too far off the mark of the original dream. But I just decided to leave it more open ended and let whoever reads it decide. I am now actually very, very curious about your version. You should write it. I very much support this venture.
What? Why does my room need redecorating? It's perfectly fine the way it is as of now! Though, the bed does need linens but I only sleep there sometimes. And the paint is fine, and there is a very nice picture on the wall already.
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I am strongly tempted to severely redecorate your room. I'm talking paint, curtains, linens *on* the bed, some nice pictures on the wall...
SPRING AWAKENING! <3 that song...
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I am now actually very, very curious about your version. You should write it. I very much support this venture.
What? Why does my room need redecorating? It's perfectly fine the way it is as of now! Though, the bed does need linens but I only sleep there sometimes. And the paint is fine, and there is a very nice picture on the wall already.
I KNOW! So so sad, though...
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She said you adored it. I can see this is true.
AND YES I HAVE TIDES IT IS SAD AND PRETTY AND PRETTY AND GOOD.
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