Babysitter

May 26, 2009 22:56

Babysitter
No pairing - you'll realize in a moment why that would be wholly inappropriate.
Rated PG

I have absolutely no idea how to end this thing, so I just stopped writing.

Charon broke a twig into smaller and smaller pieces... )

character: charon, author: caingraham, rating: pg, character: vault dweller

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thekayla May 27 2009, 03:17:57 UTC
Aww. Is that a baby vault dweller? :)

This was cute. I liked it a lot. Great job! :D

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heavenztrash May 27 2009, 03:26:44 UTC
Very interesting premise!
It lacks the unapologetic, bold, "go there-ness" that I've come to expect and love in your stories but it was heart warming nonetheless!
Can't say I'm not psychically nudging you to do another no holds barred hot ghoul throwdown though. ;)

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caingraham May 27 2009, 05:13:31 UTC
Thanks you two!

Thought I'd try another something new. It just such a lame ending. I was looking for 'something' but I just couldn't come up with anything so I gave up. And I'm telling you, the porn just doesn't happen for me. My sex life spices up and you get the two hot sentances in the last one. That's about all I can muster.

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cyprith May 27 2009, 14:10:22 UTC
I LOVE IT. *.* That is so SWEET. *dies*

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purplewithpink May 27 2009, 14:16:35 UTC
Aw, ghouls and babies... I've been playing around with the idea for Gob/Baby LW because I thought trying to get a LW with Charon would be almost unbelievable, but you made it work great!

"Charon wrapped her blanket a little tighter and shifted her a little closer to himself. “I don't like kids.” - I think that's my favorite line. The foreshadowing of the shotgun is cool, too, and seeing Charon with a different employer.

You didn't name her here, but that's Cross, right? First time I've seen her in a fic. "Your father would be proud!"

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