Fic: Sherlock/Lestrade - "Atavism"

Aug 24, 2010 10:01

Title: Atavism
Chapter: 1/1
Author: inlaterdays
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sherlock/Lestrade
Words: 749
Disclaimer: Don't own; just playing.
Summary: Sherlock says goodbye to his pre-221B flat.
A/N: First fanfic in a long time; first ever in this fandom. Just a vignette and I know it's not good. I'm sorry.

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 14:55:18 UTC
Thank you so much! I was terrified of posting because the rest of you guys are SO SO GOOD, but I wanted to have a try. I do love this pairing.

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 15:01:34 UTC
I'm thinking about it - they are addictive! :D

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thandie August 24 2010, 14:26:10 UTC
Ok, honest opinion: this is wonderful. What were you self-conscious of, exactly? I *adore* your writing style too, elegant but dry and to the point, and I anticipate I'll definitely like your plotting too (of the porny and not porny variety). I was totally all over this one.

THE BITING. DID YOU KNOW IT IS MY FIRST WEAKNESS? You got my first weakness at the first try...so, WHEN ARE YOU WRITING MORE? :D:D:D

Colonel Landa approves.

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 14:56:26 UTC
Thank you! :D I was/am scared because I haven't written anything in AGES, and everyone else in this fandom is insanely talented! (Including you! *poke*)

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thandie August 24 2010, 15:01:40 UTC
Don't poke me, I made TWO things already; it's still your turn to work and mine to poke. :P

I keep seeing unfilled Lestrade/Sherlock prompts on that meme, you should go and make some of them justice. ;)

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 15:03:29 UTC
I've got my eye on a couple. :D And a gen prompt too!

(But of course I think about writing way more than I actually write.)

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chocolate_limes August 24 2010, 14:38:05 UTC
Mwuah! This is wonderful, I really love Lestrade's bitterness and reluctance and behavioral atavism X333 And your voice for Sherlock is wonderful!

Do they really stop seeing each other o.o this is not fair! I demand more! MOAR!

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 14:57:29 UTC
Thank you so much! Whew, it is a relief that some people aren't finding it completely terrible. I could do a prequel and/or a sequel, I think.

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chocolate_limes August 24 2010, 15:15:12 UTC
Piffle! This is the furthest thing from terrible since they decided to sell bread sliced! :O

Prequel AND Sequel? IS IT CHRISTMAS? :D :D

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nixxie_ August 24 2010, 15:16:06 UTC
Really good. well written *nods* do more!

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 15:57:03 UTC
Thank you so much!

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inlaterdays August 24 2010, 15:58:28 UTC
Hee, thank you so much! You guys are being kind, which is so nice of you and a huge relief to me. All the rest of you are so good I'm intimidated - but it felt good to get this first bit posted.

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