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ghislainem70

The Fourth Clue.

Mar 10, 2011 18:16

The Fourth Clue. Sherlock leaves four clues for John. Guess what Sherlock is trying to tell him.

( Read more at my LJ )

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c0ntrarywise March 11 2011, 08:12:46 UTC

Only Sherlock would leave clues like that about his feelings :) Thanks for sharing!

Process of Elimination ghislainem70 March 11 2011, 11:38:02 UTC

Thanks for reading! Somehow I felt he had to do this the way he does everything else.

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c0ntrarywise March 20 2011, 05:33:35 UTC

Why thank you :) I'll check it out.

catgirlpoison March 11 2011, 13:16:45 UTC

I loved the clues and Sherlock thinking this is going to be addictive.

How could I resist reading a story by someone with the grace to listen to Brian Eno, who I love.

Process of Elimination ghislainem70 March 11 2011, 15:25:59 UTC

Isn't Eno just divine? Cerebral and soothing. Thanks for reading, I plan to continue on, perhaps adding Lestrade in some capacity. Cheers!

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catgirlpoison March 19 2011, 19:31:59 UTC

I've been meaning to read this because of course I love Fatboy Slim and Weapon of Choice. I'll have to comment more later.

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ourdramaqueen March 11 2011, 16:45:38 UTC

Lovely. John completely clueless, but he gets there in the end, with a little help. :) I love how considerate Sherlock is of him.

Process of elimination, or, the Four Clues ghislainem70 March 11 2011, 18:33:26 UTC

thanks for reading, I felt that Sherlock has a core of kindness that is overlooked by his possibly self-protective claim of being high-functioning sociopath. But seeminly its John who can reach that core of kindness, but no one else. Follow ups may shoe Shelock a bit bolder, now that they are starting to figure this out. :)

eightnoon March 24 2011, 02:00:54 UTC

That was wonderful! I love that Sherlock was leaving all those clues and John was oblivious. You write a very well thought out story.

ghislainem70 March 24 2011, 03:33:51 UTC

Yay!!! So happy you went backmand visited the boys' first time. It ws fun to write. Thanks for the kudos :):). Back to Full Fathom....

random_nexus October 18 2011, 22:25:07 UTC

Woah. Did I mention unf and guh yet? Also, there was something about some knickers on fire, but I couldn't stop reading to be sure. Some sirens maybe? I dunno. Wow.

The detail of John's torture was painful, but such a good touch to fill his character in here, and the clues were clever, definitely felt like a Sherlock thought-process. Heh.

Two thumbs up and the asploded knickers seal of approval here!

ghislainem70 October 18 2011, 22:44:45 UTC

Ahh, you found my little First Time Fic. It was the very first thing I ever wrote in this fandom, and I'm glad it still stands up to the knickers test;-) Your comments of goodness are making my day, thanks for that!!<3
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