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trixieblue in gg_fic

Introductory fic

Dec 28, 2005 06:00

Hi there. I'm new to the community, so just wanted to say a quick hello before posting fic. Let's see if I can do all these cuts right.

Title: Choix
Author: trixieblue
Rating: PG
Characters: Emily POV
Summary: Lorelai's wedding day is bittersweet for Emily. No spoilers.

( The champagne is flat.

Richard notices her frown, raises a questioning eyebrow. )

relationship: emily/lorelai, character: emily, pairing: luke/lorelai

Comments 7

blackandwhite02 December 28 2005, 13:44:14 UTC

This is good. It's a wonderful and realistic explanation of Emily's subconscious. I'm going to add this to my memories.

trixieblue December 28 2005, 17:37:07 UTC

Wow, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

hjcallipygian December 28 2005, 19:12:43 UTC

I really like this story a lot. Well-written, and the short, chopped paragraphs emphasize Emily's thought cadence really well.

prncesssprklpnt December 28 2005, 19:23:19 UTC

I really enjoyed reading this story. As a huge GG fan, I feel like you captured Emily quite well.

aintmagicgrand December 29 2005, 05:20:33 UTC

places it on a tray carried by a man she's fairly certain was a dog walker the last time she was in Stars Hollow.

That made me laugh for about 5 minutes. That line was beautifully written.

The entire story was really great. You rarely find this sort of fic, about Emily and her subconscious. It was a very interesting read. :)

sintari January 21 2006, 21:44:22 UTC

This is very well written! I found it completely IC and a wonderful look at the inside of Emily's head. Thanks for sharing!