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No Regrets - Roslin/Cain - NC-17

Jul 19, 2008 20:21

Title: No Regrets
Author: pocketwitch
Pairing: Roslin/Cain with memories of Cain/Gina
Rating: NC-17
Notes: This was written for frogfrizz for getyourtoaster's ficathon in celebration of the International Day of Femslash. I hope you like it, dear Froggy!

Many, many thanks to the ever outstanding and thoroughly cookie worthy nnaylime for the beta, even though I was, um, a bit last minute ( Read more... )

by:pocketwitch, 8:humans, p:laura/cain, r:nc17, .story

Comments 15

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pocketwitch July 20 2008, 00:48:31 UTC

And only the best cookies. Because you remain r0xx0r. <3 <3 <3

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pocketwitch July 20 2008, 17:43:09 UTC

Indeed! I actually meant to do that last night and completely forgot.

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pocketwitch July 20 2008, 02:51:30 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought it was hot. I am a huge fan of this pairing; I think these two women would be amazing together and I'm so sorry they didn't get more shared screentime.

frogfrizz July 20 2008, 08:19:16 UTC

Oh my. I only just got to this and...and...*wipes sweat from brow* that was totally HOT! Thank you so very much for writing this piece. I hadn't expected you to use the prompt the way you did. I am also glad that you were very straightforward about the sexxing. No regrets, indeed! Thanks so much for writing! Thoroughly enjoyed this piece!

pocketwitch July 20 2008, 11:41:59 UTC

I don't always use prompts so directly, but yours just seemed to work, and the idea built up in my mind around it. I'm so glad you liked it! Yay! I wanted to write you some smut that you'd enjoy, I'm glad I succeeded in that!

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pocketwitch July 20 2008, 20:06:16 UTC

The legs line was for you, Nun. I thought of you when I thought of that line and thought "The Nun will love this, I have to write it!"

And I'm always glad to be a source of inappropriate giggling! :D And yeah, the timeline thing is tricky, because unless you go AU with these two, there's just so damned little time.

Thank you, Nun - so glad you liked it!

baltimoreandme July 20 2008, 21:24:12 UTC

I really enjoyed this story. What I like here is that there is no atmosphere, or detail for the sake of detail, or scene-setting. The text does not consider what color blouse Roslin is wearing, or what else might be in the room, or the sighs/sounds/smells/etc. of the ship. The effect of this is to focus the story very tightly on the minds and bodies of Roslin and Cain, which really makes the story move. Nice! (Also, I have always liked this pairing, so doubleplus points for hotness. As mandala said above, Roslin and Cain should indeed rule the world ;)

pocketwitch July 21 2008, 00:26:48 UTC

Thank you so much for the feedback, and I'm so glad you liked it! And I'm very glad the style worked for you; there are a few stylistic choices in this story that deviate from my norm, but I've never been one for adding a lot of detail - as a reader I'm more of a "just tell me the story damn it" type, so I tend to write that way as well.

They should rule the world. Oh frak yes!