Chapter 7 of "Rage and Temptation"

[get_out_alive24]

Chapter 7 is here!

Title: This Innocence is Brilliant
Author: Stephanie (Me)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Bella meets the Cullens
Spoilers: No
Word Count: 2,640
Author's Notes: Please read and comment. I hope you enjoy.

Addison:

Edward and Bella were going to the meadow tomorrow, and the whole family was taking bets on wether Edward would bring her home or not.

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Comments

[vampire_envy9]

Lovely chapter, as always.
The only thing is, is that the story seems to really revolve around Addison. The story is mostly about Addison, I know, but even the parts where it's supposed to be about Bella are mostly about Addison. I'm sorry, I really don't mean to be rude or anything, and I do really like your story, it's just something I noticed. I was thinking that, because Bella and Edward's story seems sort of irrelevant to your story, you should just stick to Addison's PoV. I don't know. I'm sorry if anything I said offended you.
It would be interesting to see New Moon with Addison. Would she even let Edward leave Bella? Actually I hope you do decide to do that.
Unfortunately I have yet to see an actress that looks like Addison -or Matthew for that matter- to me.I'll tel you if I do.

[get_out_alive24]

Hmm... I see your point. Mostly I do that because we all know the story from Bella's eyes, and I want to show how Bella reacts to her. But I think I'll take your suggestion and stick to addy's POV. It's a lot easier since Addy is my character. And don't worry about being offensive. It's perfectly fine to state your opinion. =) And yea, Addy will let Edward leave Bella, but she won't be happy about it. In fact, she'll be absolutely horrible. -evil shmile- I am continuing, so don't worry. And would you like to be my beta? Since we have each other's e-mails, I thought having a beta might help with my writing. You don't have to, only if you want. ;)

[vampire_envy9]

And I see your point. You could just make Bella and Edward hang around her a lot. It's a bit more subtle way of showing their reaction to her, in my opinion.
I would love to be your beta. You're going to have to be patient though. Especially since it's the end of the school year. The teachers always pile a bunch of projects on us students at this time. Ewies.

[get_out_alive24]

Yea same here. I have to projects due within two days of each other. Thank God they're group projects though. And I'm trying for Three Days Grace tickets. My friend called and told me they're coming close to where we live, so me and my gang are trying to get tickets.

[yoi_shacu]

i love MCR!!!!!!
good fic!

[get_out_alive24]

Thank you!

um?

[anonymous]

Hi, I’m sorry, but I’m very confused. I was on Google, looking for pictures of Edward Cullen and I ran across this. I read the whole story this Addison girl fits well in the story but who is she? I don’t remember reading about her in Twilight and it left me quit confused.

Re: um?

[get_out_alive24]

Well, you can click the tag to read the whole story. What I did was added a new Cullen girl (Addison) who is Edward's twin sister. Addison is an OC (original character) that I made up. that's why she wasn't in Twilight.