Battered. H/W.

Sep 16, 2007 04:34

Title: Battered.
Author: skulling
Pairing/Rating: House/Wilson/Pancakes. NC-17.
Words: 5,000.
Notes: I went nuts. I’m sorry. This is incredibly long, but I guarantee you, it’s worth the read. Unbetaed, so there might be typoes, but I’ve been working on it forever, so I’m quite happy with the flow, etc.
Prompt: 126. House/Wilson - Pancakes.
Summary: WILLSON ( Read more... )

author: skulling, pairing: house/wilson, fic

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triedunture September 16 2007, 15:43:03 UTC
fanFUCKINGtastic. It was not only hot, but very emotionally aware. I really felt all the anxiety along with House and Wilson, and the final scene where House wakes up alone nearly made me cry, but then it ended happily, and what a relief! Memming like mad.

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carnivalesque September 16 2007, 18:33:57 UTC
:D Thank you, darling! I'm really glad that this fic went over so well. I worked on it so long that I sort of grew unable to really look at it objectively. But it did what it was supposed to, so yay!

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saito_enfadadiz September 16 2007, 15:53:26 UTC
need a cold bath *.*
i love it!

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carnivalesque September 16 2007, 18:34:20 UTC
Thank you!

*bathes you in cold pancake batter*

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phinnia September 16 2007, 16:39:59 UTC
The food fight-into-sex thing was /fabulous/. And I love the imagery of House covered in pancake batter and giggling ... (and why do I picture House and/or Wilson making obscenely tasteless battered-spouse/lover jokes ...)

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carnivalesque September 16 2007, 18:34:44 UTC
(Because they so would.)

Thank you so much!

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loveme_likethat September 16 2007, 17:14:29 UTC
Incredibly hot and yet so... Somehow I imagine this is exactly how House seduces - all schoolboy irritation and immaturity. Poor Wilson. Mmmmmm, lovely.

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carnivalesque September 16 2007, 18:35:33 UTC
xD Agreed. He's too much of a child to go about it seriously. This was so fun.

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carnivalesque September 16 2007, 18:36:05 UTC
And thank you!

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theyreforrachel September 16 2007, 19:40:38 UTC
Wow. This is amazing.

It's so IC it's scary. :3

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theyreforrachel September 16 2007, 19:44:25 UTC
OH AND YOUR SUMMERY MADE ME LULZ

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theyreforrachel September 16 2007, 19:45:07 UTC
*summary. haha. I'm just gonna keep commenting until something I say is coherent.

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carnivalesque September 16 2007, 19:51:18 UTC
<333333

Thank you so much! I was hoping people would enjoy my summary. It's a LOL!summary. xD

And please, keep commenting. Comments are <3.

I'm going to shamelessly add here that I wish someone would rp wif me. *pout*

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