Fic: Breaking Through (2/2)

[gestaltrose]

Breaking Through
Author: gestaltrose aka chaosrosa
Title: Breaking Through (2/2)
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6059 this part 11,800 total
Beta my beautiful embroiderama who also helped me out with the title. . .all remaining errors are mine.
Warnings: AU, Hurt!Jensen, Hurt!Jared, slash, established relationship, first time, angst,
Disclaimer: Jared,

Comments

[gestaltrose]

aww Well thank you for sticking through it.... I'm glad you like it.

[apieceofcake]

Enjoyed, thank you :-)

[gestaltrose]

Hey baby!!! I got your cards today.... OMG I love you SOOOOOO much. They are beautiful!!!

*snuggles you* Thank you honey, you made my day.

[apieceofcake]

You're welcome! Glad you liked :-)

Absolutely Lovely

[anonymous]

Absolutely lovely story. I loved the pacing, which was perfection. Jensen going home, Jared falling apart, Jeff and co taking turns staying with him...it all felt so completely natural. The characterizations felt just as natural and the whole story flowed as emotions went up and down.

I also loved where you ended the story. The story was about whether Jensen and Jared could overcome this horrible incident and find one another, not whether Jensen recovers his memories. It made for an absolutely perfect ending to a great story. I'm definitely adding this one to my favorites.

Though, as an aside, I definitely wouldn't mind a sequel! :) Great job, and thank you for sharing.

Re: Absolutely Lovely

[gestaltrose]

Wow... what wonderful feedback. I am very happy you liked the story... I don't know if there will be a sequel or not... I've got ummm four or five other stories that I am working on right now... not including my exchange gifts...

[deanbear25]

Dude your writing rocks and I feel so giddy to be able to say that I actually got to meet you in person and give you a hug.

I think I am in love with your muse

[gestaltrose]

Hey mutual fangirl club. I am so glad I got to meet you too.... you always make my day!!

My muse, man does she like to beat these boys up. And she appreciates you comment too.

[shelgrainger2]

Ah I am so glad that Jensen came back and gave it a try with Jared because it was heartbreaking to see Jared so desolate without Jensen.

[gestaltrose]

Yeah, Jared kind of fell apart without his Jensen there....

Thank you for leaving feedback you are always so kind. *loves*