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[gerolyn7]

Dean pushed back the layers of muck that covered his brother's body. The words hung around him as stale as the air in the cemetery. 'Buried alive!' He shuddered, hands cramping as they raked through a thick layer of roots. "Sam!" He yelled through his dirt covered throat, his own desperation ringing in his ears. "Sammy!" His finger grazed across

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[9tiptoes]

You may not know.where it came from, but it was very nicely done. Beautiful if not muddy imagery, desperate emotions, very nicely executed speed one shot.

[gerolyn7]

Thank you sweetie. Yeah, when I'm upset weird things come out.

[9tiptoes]

I'm that way too. I always try to write angst on a stressful day.

[peepingdru]

I LIKE::))) Different for u me thinks...more emotive than porny PG....I like::))

[mjlove1]

i liked this! it was scary in the beginning, and i didnt know where it would go. but i liked the way you ended it. nice job my friend!

[nickersbumpkin]

Wow! So much desperation & fear yet love in this! Absolutely amazing that you made me feel like I was the one buried or trying to dig my sister out of the mud (without the porn of course LMAO). I imagine this is what dean and Sam always feel like.

[winsangel]

"You didn't leave me." The younger searched for a way to show gratitude, his hand gliding down the muscular arms that dug him out of his untimely grave.

"I'm nothing with out you." The elder confessed into his brother's mouth, tongue chasing after the sweet words.

I've wondered about this happening to the boys at some point, and having it collapse one or both of them is just another nightmare to add to the backlog of nightmares.

This was so sweet with just a touch of porny goodness - I love it.