The Empty Room - I/2

Jul 05, 2009 14:14



~*~*~ I sing of things that were ~*~*~

i/2 - cut one )

fic: the empty room

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germanjj July 25 2009, 09:23:31 UTC
I wanted to pet Chad all the time because of the things I did to him... poor guy. ;P

And I kinda needed to put Sandy in there too, because Jared would have had no one. With Jensen not there, he only has Chad and her...

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jodean80 July 24 2009, 23:45:40 UTC
I can't really blame Chad for leaving. Must hurt like hell to find out your friend lied to you and that he prefers the best friend from his dreams
I think he left because he just had enough. For now.
He's Chad. He can't stay away from Jared.

And poor Jared. He seems so lost. He can't always dream about the guy's green eyes.
And his reality knocks the air out of his lungs. Literally.
That's no way to live.

And what did Sandy wanted to say with that last sentence??
What does she know??

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germanjj July 28 2009, 21:54:02 UTC
yeah, poor chad has feelings too!! and I would be so hurt if a friend would say something like that to me... but yeah, you're right, he's chad, so we'll see ;D

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chica_charlie July 25 2009, 05:20:11 UTC
FLAILING HERE. EPIC FLAIL. *demonstrates*

I love how you altered the blue tape thing just slightly, enough that I noticed the difference and understood it better this time around but not enough to change the scene too much.

Have I mentioned how much I FREAKING LOVE THIS?

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germanjj July 26 2009, 09:28:12 UTC
yeah, about the blue tapes.. that was just the typical thing because in my head of course I knew what it was about but then I realized I haven't told anyone ;P

yes you mentioned, but hey, you can say it again if you want... ;D

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\^0^/ a_silentsoul August 2 2009, 14:46:09 UTC
I feel a little sad for Chad after this chapter, and for Jared.

If I were Chad, I thought I would have the same feeling. But I hope in the following story, they could make up. After all, they are still the best friends:)
I have already read the recommendation(that why I know this story. It's a pity I didn't know this earlier.), so I know that the ending will be good. But this story still makes me feel very nervous

Now I'm going to read the following story.
Thank you for sharing this awesome story

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Re: \^0^/ germanjj August 14 2009, 20:19:19 UTC
thank you for reading it!!! yep, I kinda feel sad for Chad too. Jared doesn't even know what he's saying to his friend and how much he's hurting him with it.

ahh, and of course the ending will be good!! ;P I never write un-happy endings!!

thank you for that lovely comment!! :)

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mangacat201 August 25 2009, 19:23:19 UTC
OMG... this tale is so much getting under my skin... the surprising swings to the dreams, the half truths that we only know as long as Jared doesn't and the anguish in the writing, and now that flourish at the end. that was really, really great. *mouth gapes* have to read on.
Cat

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germanjj August 26 2009, 20:16:27 UTC
okay, will continue to answer your comments now! this - made of win!! thank you so much!!

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