There's Nothing That Can Change Just How This Goes

[geranosaurusfic]

Title: There's Nothing That Can Change Just How This Goes
Rating: R
Pairing: Peterick
Summary: Pete was basically in love with Patrick since the first time they met. But Patrick had some problems, and Patrick needed somebody to take care of him. Pete didn't mind. He didn't even mind when he had to start stealing. He didn't even mind when he had to

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[geranosaurusfic]

First of all, thank you very much for taking the time to give me such a thorough review. Really. <3

Secondly, I can totally see what you are saying. Part of the problem was, honestly, that I ended up coming up with more plot for this than I had planned on, and I got sick of it. Not even wait and I'll like it again, more like I never want to write this again. :P But you're definitely right about Pete's motivation for stealing...I was even thinking that. I may go back and expand on that more, actually.

I will say that this one is not one of my best anyway, because it got pushed back and such. And I am actually terribly out of practice anyway. D:

But seriously, thank you so much for this. I will definitely consider this when I write. And if I get inspired, I will definitely work on this.

And...I don't have a beta, actually. :3 I can never find one I like...and I certainly wouldn't mind trying you as my beta. :)

[geranosaurusfic]

Thank you so much! :D
And yeah, it's supposed to be Amanda Palmer. :)

[fall_out_nurse]

Loved this so much! ♥ hope you don't mind that I mem'd this