THREE-WAY

[george66]

Title: THREE-WAY Chapter Four - the final chapter.
Pairing: Ennis Del Mar - Jack Twist - and Jack's twin cousin Jake Gyllenhaal.
Disclaimer: We know the drill.
Genre: The ultimate AU!AU
Thanks: To my wonderful and glorious betas beatriceorme and alaynia. Believe me they both gone beyond the call of duty! To trekfan for her encouragment and opinion!
Declaration: To victopet who has

Comments

I'm Speechless!

[victopet]

Wow George, I am totally at a loss for words. This was so cool. You managed to create a special tendre between Jack and Ennis (with their developing relationship and conversation) while making the threesome angle totally believable too!

Now (after a very hot foursome I wish I could have seen), Jack and Ennis can go back to getting to know each other at the ranch and become a couple for real, while Jake and Heath can crawl back under their own rock.

The fact that you made Jack and Ennis able to talk openly was so nice. They said things to each other I wish they'd been able to say in the movie!!

I found your story to be such an interesting combination of hot sex but also profound conversation and heartfelt revelations. If we could all be so lucky to have soulmates we could share all those things with!!

Thank you so much for this story!!!!

Vic

P.S. I loved this line and laughed out loud at the thought of Ennis's dad "down there":
“Pa, are you up in heaven looking down at your son? Who knows, maybe looking up instead, huh?

Re: I'm Speechless!

[george66]

Vic,

I said it before and I say it again - YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I AM TO READ HOW MANY PLEASURE YOU'VE GOTTEN READING THIS STORY!! I SUCCEEDED AT DOING EXACTLY WHAT THIS STORY WAS SUPPOSE TO DO! TO PUT A SMILE ON YOUR FACE!!

Oh yes, wouldn't it been lovely if our boys could have simply open up to another and spoke from their hearts and listen to what each of them had to say. I think that is the one thing we all wish from the film and OS. For Jack and especially Ennis to not be afraid of the love they have for one other but to embrace and joy it! Love is so rare in this world so when you discover it, grab hold and never once let it go!!!

I would have written a foursome, but I kid you not, I found myself struck at how write on! (weird isn't it?)

Happy Holidays Vic!! And thank you so much for inspirting me at writing this!! It was fun.

GEORGE

Re: Once Again..Wow!

[george66]

Thank you Jamie for reading this story. Trust me it was a lot of fun reading. Yes I thought about a Ennis/Heath/Jack/Jake hook up but I couldn't found a way at doing it to my satisfaction. That's why I wrote in the first summary, "a possibility of a third lover." Thanks again for reading.

Happy Holidays

GEORGE

[trekfan]

GEORGE! this is FANTASTIC! Hot! WOW I was laughing when Heath showed up.

cudos! on a wonderful story! mate

[george66]

Linda,

I just saw you trying to AIM! I walked away from the computer for a just a moment and by the time I got back you was saying off!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Of course it would not have been nearly as good without your encouragement and sharing your wonderful suggestions!! Thanks lamb.

GEORGE

[trekfan]

you're welcome George :D Glad I could help. I hope you have more stories up your sleeve!

I knew it!!

[lalaynia]

:Singing:
"Still, they're cousins,
Identical cousins and you'll find,
They laugh alike, they walk alike,
At times they even talk alike --

You can lose your mind,
When cousins are two of a kind." (Patty Duke Show)

Two sets of identicals, one being Heath/Ennis and the other Jake/Jack! What an imagination!

Love the "Twist" at the end, that ol' Blue Eyes was the one Don Wroe wanted to sell to. I would love to see the reaction when Jack finds out who the forearm (LOL- you Still missed that!)er, foreman is! He might have to spank Ennis for holding out on him!

Fun story, George- thanks for letting me be a part of it. Now exactly WHERE is that motel room? Quick, before they check out! ;D

Re: I knew it!!

[george66]

Yes Joan,

I saw the mistake myself after posting. Thank you so much for helping me with this story. You have no idea how grateful I am to you!!

Have a joyous holiday!!!!!!!!!

cyber hugs

GEORGE

[jake_harold]

Now why did this have to end at the most interesting point? The story was going so great, George :-)

[victopet]

I agree with this comment.
George can't just leave us hanging. I want to see Jake's face when Ennis is introduced as the ranch foreman.

[jake_harold]

Huh, right, vic, you're SO right about that!

I must admit George have turned me into a one track mind, so I was... you know... thinking about the most immediate events, like Ennis being with Heath, but hey! Really, what about this discovery, about him being the foreman? And all the things that may happen afterwards?

[victopet]

Well, of COURSE I also want to see those immediate events you mentioned! (My mind is on the same one track as yours). But then I wanna see more, more, more!!!!