THREE-WAY

Dec 14, 2006 20:22

Title: THREE-WAY Chapter One
Pairing: Ennis Del Mar - Jack Twist - and company.
Disclaimer: We know the drill.
Genre: The ultimate AU!AU
Thanks: To my wonderful and glorious betas beatriceorme and lalaynia. Believe me they both gone beyond the call of duty! To trekfan for her encouragment and opinion!
Declaration: To victopet who has been wanting a three-way story involving Ennis ( Read more... )

rps, ennis/jack, a!u

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victopet December 15 2006, 03:48:51 UTC
Wow! This is completely and totally about sex. OMG!! You weren't kidding!!

I knew it was Jack the hitch-hiker! That's so original!!
I love the premise. They never met on BBM, but on the roadside.

And....
Of all the men he had been with in his travels, never had Blue Eyes experienced something as life giving as being with this handsome studly stranger.

I just love me some slutty Jack!
Moving on to the next chapter.....

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george66 December 17 2006, 05:33:47 UTC
Vic,

I'm soooo glad you are enjoying this. You have been wanting a three-way for so long that I decided to write one just for you!! If no one else had made a comment, I still would have been happy because you made one!

GEORGE

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victopet December 17 2006, 05:43:26 UTC
George!
Of course I wouldn't miss it!!

Keep writing. We haven't gotten to the threesome yet!!!
Plus....I know a bunch of people who are reading but not commenting, so your audience is larger than you think. Shame on them!!

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george66 December 17 2006, 06:01:38 UTC
Vic,

Chapter four is still in beta. I want to post chapter three and four together like I did with chapter one and two. But I may post chapter three tomorrow (Sunday) regardless. I think you will truly enjoy it!!

Other people are reading the story but not commenting?? Why?? I would love to hear from them but it don't matter!! As long as they enjoy it, I'm happy!!

GEORGE

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Mega Hot! haunted_by_bbm December 15 2006, 09:03:04 UTC
I can so see Ennis putting a huge dent in the hood of his truck. hehehe
Hot and steamy...just the way we like it. ;)

'haunted'

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Re: Mega Hot! george66 December 17 2006, 06:06:00 UTC
Yes haunted,

Our Jack Twist is a studly, manly-man and he makes our Ennis, very, very, very happy!! (laughing)

GEORGE

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nstarr December 15 2006, 11:45:29 UTC
Damn...that was some hot hot sex for agrey friday morning in london...hehe much appreciated though!!!

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george66 December 17 2006, 16:52:24 UTC
nstarr,

I'm glad you enjoyed!! Oh my God I got readers all the way from London town! I feel so international. (grinning)

GEORGE

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anonymous December 15 2006, 16:46:53 UTC
“You wanna watch me stroke it?”

“Can’t stop ya, seeing how I’m driving.” Shit, did I just say that? Ennis thought. Not only did Ennis say it, but he also made his point even more clear when he involuntarily began licking his lips. Driving at a slower speed, Ennis became bolder, looking more and more at the Blue Eyes’ exposed cock while still trying to look at the road.

God George, this was hot Hot HOT!!!! Few sights are more erotic than a man doing that. I would have driven off the road fer sure, but what a way to go!! Good story too -

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george66 December 17 2006, 17:03:05 UTC
Yes it is a beautiful sight and Ennis will be seeing and enjoying a whole lot more. Glad that you are enjoying the story. While this is definitely a sexual story, I wanted to create some conflict in Ennis' mind. After the original character was fighting demons about accepting himself as gay and I wanted to continue that here.

GEORGE

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katetwist December 15 2006, 17:31:12 UTC
Wow George! You really know how to brighten up a Friday lunchtime in the office! This was deliciously hot and funny at the same time. Naughty Jack - she says trotting off to chapter 2....

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george66 December 17 2006, 17:05:53 UTC
I thought it would be fun to make Jack a little naughty in this story and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. And its only going to get hotter!

GEORGE

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