Original: "The Remnant Fleet," Chapter 26

Sep 06, 2015 22:53

SO MANY WORDS WRITTEN TODAY. :D And this is not the end. It's extremely very close to the end, but it is not the end.

Chapter Twenty-Six
The Remnant Fleet, Chapter Twenty-Six )

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alsogater September 7 2015, 05:05:22 UTC
Sooo much in this chapter! Left my head spinning. The past; the future threat/promise; the diplomacy! This one told so much all at once that had been held back and it works great!

Thanks for this one tonight with you working on a holiday weekend. Look forward to the rest when you have it. Have a great holiday. ;)

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geonncannon September 7 2015, 05:09:38 UTC
You write when the muse strikes! And yes, I knew I wanted to write this moment today, but as of last night I had NO idea what was going to happen or what Bauwerji would say/do to end the war. It just came to me all at once, and it worked so perfectly that it was Bauwerji saying it. I call it my Doctor Who solution, because the Doctor would certainly talk his way out of a war. ;)

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alsogater September 7 2015, 17:37:56 UTC
The muse knows! I seem to remember that the 1st(or 2nd)version some of this was incorporated in the beginning chapter and didn't work as well as this does. I also hear from other authors that the characters tell them when they are ready for confession and/or action, etc.
When in doubt: go with The Doctor, by all means. ;)

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