Sooo much in this chapter! Left my head spinning. The past; the future threat/promise; the diplomacy! This one told so much all at once that had been held back and it works great!
Thanks for this one tonight with you working on a holiday weekend. Look forward to the rest when you have it. Have a great holiday. ;)
You write when the muse strikes! And yes, I knew I wanted to write this moment today, but as of last night I had NO idea what was going to happen or what Bauwerji would say/do to end the war. It just came to me all at once, and it worked so perfectly that it was Bauwerji saying it. I call it my Doctor Who solution, because the Doctor would certainly talk his way out of a war. ;)
The muse knows! I seem to remember that the 1st(or 2nd)version some of this was incorporated in the beginning chapter and didn't work as well as this does. I also hear from other authors that the characters tell them when they are ready for confession and/or action, etc. When in doubt: go with The Doctor, by all means. ;)
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Thanks for this one tonight with you working on a holiday weekend. Look forward to the rest when you have it. Have a great holiday. ;)
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When in doubt: go with The Doctor, by all means. ;)
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