Original: "The Remnant Fleet," Chapter 19

[geonncannon]

I HATE doing nothing all day and then having a burst of productivity right before bed, staying up late to finish the chapter. My whole schedule is out of whack, and I hates it. But at least there's a new chapter. That's not nothing. ;)

Chapter Nineteen

Comments

[alsogater]

I really like they way this story is presented: each chapter from the POV of a different person and with a brief hint of their background.

'She didn’t know if she could truly live with what she’d suggested, but it truly was the best option in a swarm of bad ones.'
Nothing actually wrong with the above sentence but I always find it awkward when the same word is used twice in the same sentence unless it is meant for emphasis. You could leave it that way, drop the 2nd one, or exchange it with another word like 'really' or 'legitimately' or 'sincerely'. Just sayin'.