Original: "The Remnant Fleet," Chapter 18

[geonncannon]

More words! Up to 45k on this version, which I think is around where the last version ended. I'm officially seeing this one through to the end! :D

Chapter Eighteen

Comments

[alsogater]

Exciting chapter; lots of action.

Sautoriau men had a distinctly pungent odor about them ^ assaulted her Karezz senses.
Needs 'that' or 'which'?

The security officers were threw the door
Last paragraph - you must have been really tired to use the wrong 'threw' - should be through

Thank you for the chapter - can I stay up to read just one more? B-D

[geonncannon]

Tsk, you know, sometimes my brain recites it so fast I can't keep up with my transcribing. Damn homophones. ;)

And I'd appreciate it, but sleep is vital too!

[alsogater]

An yet...it is way past your bedtime, too. ;)