Original: "The Remnant Fleet," Chapter 11

[geonncannon]

A LOT of this chapter came from Version 2.0, but it was polished up to fit into Version 3. Hopefully it doesn't repeat itself too much. We're getting deeper into the plot now! The difference this time is I don't feel like I've been spinning my wheels up to this point. Our players are in place, and now it's time to give them an enemy to fight.

Comments

[alsogater]

Hijinks ensued. Very humorous exchange of words. And we're off! To war? Adventure? Can't wait to find out what happens next.

One little squeak very near the beginning of the chapter: 'She moved closed to one of the monitors and'
close? closer?

Thanks for the chapter.