Original: "Girls Don't Hit," Chapter Twenty-Three and Twenty-Four

[geonncannon]

We crossed the 70k threshold! I'm comfortable with a novel being 70-100k, so that means this novel is officially novel-length in my eyes. Which is a good thing, because we're nearing the finish line. We're in Act III, I'll just say that much. Again, if there's another chapter today, it'll be added to this post when it's finished. Or! You can always

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[mrswoman]

Oh, I'm commenting after 23 :)

Fascinating dynamics - Joss and her 'family', so robotic, I guess, and what she lets Colin do... how do you get your ideas :)

[geonncannon]

I try not to ask myself the question about "where"... I just thank the heavens that they're still showing up! ;D

Oh! And I have an answer for a question you once brought up. I shall email. :D

[geonncannon]

New chapter is up! :D