snippet of 'stories thrice told'

[gentle_edgar]

[should be finished by next friday. *hopes

Comments

[susnn]

With this as a snippet, I can't wait for that from which it was snipped. I do like the names for the soon to be lovers: "without end" and "bright shining." The last line hurts with what she left unconfirmed; John's "lived happily ever after" answered by his mother's "they lived, that's true."

[bratfarrar]

Thanks! Your comment gave me the boost I needed to buckle down and finally finish the darn thing. :D