scratch ii

[gentle_edgar]

as susnn requested, the follow-up to scratch (though this doesn't preclude the full-blown story that's in the works); for gen_drabble challenge 18: master/slave
He's a soldier, not a prince, but she doesn't care.He crooks a mental finger at her, and she obeys without hesitation, even as he half-knew she would

Comments

[ninja007]

I liked this so much. I also got a Monty Python moment out of it, with your phrase "expression that of someone who’s been smacked in the face with a fish".

Too short, but soooo delicious.

Well done.

[bratfarrar]

Leave 'em wanting more, that's what they say, right? :P I am hoping to start sharing some longer stories in the next month or so.

Glad you enjoyed it!