Derek can feel the alien infuence on him, changing the way he thinks and perceives the world...
That's an exciting concept to explore, but it sounds like it wasn't explored very well - what a shame!
he spent a lot of time explaining things Sounds like the author reads a lot of Heinlein! (did I spell that right?) That drives me nuts. Once is okay, but more than that and it becomes less about story and more about the author showing off their cool ideas etc.
That's what really disappointed me! There were some really neat ideas there, but so many of them were just kind of discarded after being brought up. Sad.
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That's an exciting concept to explore, but it sounds like it wasn't explored very well - what a shame!
he spent a lot of time explaining things
Sounds like the author reads a lot of Heinlein! (did I spell that right?) That drives me nuts. Once is okay, but more than that and it becomes less about story and more about the author showing off their cool ideas etc.
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