“Den lysende himmel.”

[genkyoku]

It wasn't a love written in the stars.

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Comments

[tani_matsumoto]

to be honest I read this because of the pretty original title!!
But it was beautiful... so sad! I loved it!!

I´m swedish by the way so the title made total sense..lol!! :P

[genkyoku]

Lol actually it wasn't really original, I pretty much just copied the style of Den lille havfrue, which was written in Danish, if I'm not mistaken. :D

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked it. ^^

[yhue]

What? What do you mean this is your last in a while?

Either way this was prettyyyyy. No keyboard smashes because this story actually makes sense and it makes me want to make sense too. ilu Shami.

I think what I loved most about this was how hopeful it was at the start. And the ending when we're obviously not going to see anything between them you go back to that hopeeee. Oh.

Loving the layout btw. c:

[genkyoku]

Yeah, my last in a while, Reniii. :3

LOOOOOL I knew it my stuff usually doesn't make sense~ j/k bb ilu2. ♥

[yhue]

Glorious I say. Gloriouuss.

Nooo, I meant the 'actually' compared to other stories in the fandom. lBBBB

YAY

[quarrions]

oh god...
this was. .
as usual... too good to ...to what??
I don´t know what to say

Aoi still liked it when the sky was darker, Uruha still preferred having the stars decorate it. But this time he appreciated the dark sky more, because against the dark sky is where stars shine the brightest.

this ..this ... thiiiis

and the whole fic ..amazing ..
I listened to den lille havfrue while reading it ..

oh, god ...seriously this is not very coherent comment, but I am really not able to express myself properly...
one just have to feel this fic ..
great

[genkyoku]

Uwaaaa~ listening to Den lille havfrue is the best while reading this, IMO. It gives you a sort of hopelessness that I was trying to go for (but obviously I'm too much of a fluff writer to succeed in that :D).

Coherence is not needed here, my dear Chiva-chan~

[ellalillie]

I admit, I read it because of the title (norrrwegian), but I'm honestly glad I decided to. It was so pretty. Loved the descriptions, the development, the beginning and the end.
When I look it over now, it looks short, but it felt longer when I read it, somehow. It was lovely ^^

[genkyoku]

LOOOL I love intriguing people~ :D
Well it is quite short compared to the others out there, but I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reading! ^^

[redimagine]

This was beautiful. I love what you did with the stars and the sky, two parts completing a whole :)

[genkyoku]

Thank you very much! :3