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genkyoku December 31 2009, 13:34:08 UTC
Ah, I like that, neutral sort of happy. I'm glad you think that~ thanks for reading! ^^

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yhue December 31 2009, 13:39:32 UTC
dflkasdfghhhjhhhhhh YOU KNOW, I'm in love with how totally undramatised this is. Everything just is, the pacing and everything. Oh bb. ♥ keep it up.

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genkyoku December 31 2009, 14:25:02 UTC
Heeeeeeee bb ♥

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quarrions January 3 2010, 00:15:04 UTC
lately you write these strangely calm pieces
I totally don´t feel anything while rading them only afterwards there is this sudden strike ...

and I am so in love with it ..<3

I don´t know how to call it, I don´t even know if you are aware of it and if you do it on purpose or not, but it´s something really great
maybe it´s just me and I somehow changes my attitude towards your fics (because I don´t feel this way while reading any other fics ) but I don´t really mind ...

in this one the image which got to me completly is the one where everyone is watching the fireworks, but those two are looking at each other, the light glowing on their skin...
how I feel about the scene is undescribable, but it all came just after I finished reading and i can´t get it out of my brain

baby, tell me, tell me, what are you doing to me ??? O_o

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genkyoku January 3 2010, 10:22:30 UTC
LOL but I've always written calm pieces Chiva-chan~ :3

But yes I am doing it on purpose, I'm trying to channel everything I've read, watched, and felt from works of Paulo Coelho, Umino Chica (Honey and Clover), and Yoneda Kou, or at least, try to. ^^

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quarrions January 3 2010, 10:34:13 UTC
I know you do, I know you do...
but they had never done this to me before...something must have changed, I just don´t know how to call it *bricked*

anyway keep your attempts up then ....it´s reaally great

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cateris January 4 2010, 19:59:03 UTC
OMFG, I LOVE YONEDA KOU!!!! SHE MUST BE LIKE ONE OF THE FEW MAGAKAS WITH AN ACTUAL STORY!!!!! I LOVE YAMAMOTO AND HIBARI SERIES!!!! AND BASICALLY ANY OTHER CHARACTERS AND PAIRINGS SHE CREATED!

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psychoheroine January 4 2010, 14:23:47 UTC
Everything in this piece calms my heart and probably aches me too. :) From the atmosphere down to their dialogues. And shit, I fucking love the title too.

Yuki, you are made of awesome. I mean it. :)

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genkyoku January 5 2010, 01:33:55 UTC
What? Why are you achiiiiiiiiiing~~~ D:

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lisis_miyu January 4 2010, 19:16:36 UTC
Interesting and really good.
To all the pairs that put Kai in the gazettos, Uruha is my last one but not for this the fic was not good
I really love the form and the escenary, the declaration just in the moment of the fireworks was epic and the end to a promese more that a demostration graphic like a kiss o sexx was the point of fluff necesary.
Thanks for share

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genkyoku January 5 2010, 01:35:00 UTC
Honestly, the reason why I started writing K/U is because I thought it was the most obscure pairing out there, but it seems that this pair has that certain charm, ahah.

Thank you for reading! :3

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