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May 03, 2007 12:44

Title: Sires
Author: kanedax
Continuity: "Wish"verse, circa "School Hard" (season 2)
Word Count: 5,090
Rating: Hard R for language, violence, partial nudity, and sexual content
Summary: Darla's brood revolts against her sire, as The Master sires new commanders.
Characters: Darla, Spike, Drusilla, Xander, Willow, Luke, The Master
Notes: This is hopefully ( Read more... )

author: kanedax, long, challenge no. 1

Comments 12

scarlettlily May 3 2007, 21:04:25 UTC

Wow that was fantastic, I hate that Spike had to go but that was such an amazing way to explain how the Wish 'verse was and came to be before the episode of it arrived. Great job with this.

kanedax May 3 2007, 21:34:27 UTC

Well, I figured there had to be SOME reason Spike hadn't made his mark.

Hey, you're from Chicago! I'm gonna be there next weekend for Acen!

scarlettlily May 3 2007, 22:46:34 UTC

Woooo very nice! And you're right about Spike.

shinodabear May 5 2007, 01:37:03 UTC

I have to say, this was wonderfully written. It seemed at first that it was going to be dialogue heavy, but it didn't feel it at all, if you know what I mean. Flowed nicely and was a great background/filler for the 'verse we the audience were introduced to.

kanedax May 10 2007, 14:26:21 UTC

Thanks. I pride myself on my dialogue, so I'm glad to know that it didn't feel heavy.

beer_good_foamy May 10 2007, 11:51:36 UTC

This was excellent. Great take on the Wishverse, and as much as I like Spike, you should be applauded for taking him out; it's a great dramatic move. Good explanation for VampWillow's lack of magic powers, too.

kanedax May 10 2007, 14:24:34 UTC

Thanks for the response. Like I mentioned, there HAD to be a reason why Spike hadn't made his mark in the universe. And as for VampWillow, I actually didn't think that she would HAVE to have the magic power in that reality, but I figured that power would be enough of a reason why The Master would choose her as his right hand.

Great icon, btw.

devonkmiller February 27 2008, 01:09:31 UTC

Wow. That story was just striking. I don't think that's a great word to use when describing a story but... it just was lightning on the page. Well done.
Thanks for posting.

kanedax February 27 2008, 17:10:23 UTC

Thanks a lot!

kanedax March 2 2008, 07:31:04 UTC

Oh, and if you want to read more, this is currently being used as chapter 2 in a Wishverse series that's being posted on my LJ. Table of Contents (4 chapters so far, currently writing my 5th) is posted here:

http://kanedax.livejournal.com/171048.html

nightspawn March 2 2008, 06:15:50 UTC

Wow.

That did not not go as I thought it would. Damn fine twist. Hell, I'm already making up a in-my-head sequel already :) A grieving, vengeful Dru would be far more dangerous than Spike could ever be....

I've always loved Wishverse fic and your tale was up there at the top, kudos.

kanedax March 2 2008, 07:29:55 UTC

If you want to read more, this is just one chapter in a series that I'm currently working on. Chapter 2, technically, but it's the only chapter that took place within Wishverse continuity, so I posted it for the contest.

Full chapter breakdown (four chapters so far, currently working on a fifth) is posted here:

http://kanedax.livejournal.com/171048.html

Thanks for reading!