Missing Him - Part Seven - Pale Blue Eyes

[genclay]

Title: Missing Him - Part Seven - Confrontation
Fandom: JLU
Pairings/Characters: Bruce/Clark, others
Rating: PG (this part)
Summary (This Part): Elle returns to her former self. Wally babysits. Bruce and Clark start to have 'that' conversation
Word count: ~2500 (~14000 total so far)
Disclaimer: Not mine, etc.
Notes: This fic is about 20k long (possible

Comments

[northern_star]

That had to be a pretty big shock... "You're Superman." it's kinda worse that "I'm Superman," really. LOL!

I'm glad he got his memory back and that he's been turned into good old Clark again. :D I'm looking forward to seeing more of the interaction between him and Bruce - and finding out how Martha reacts to the "loss" of her "mom". *lol* :D

[genclay]

Heheh,

'Your superman!'

'No I'm not'

'Yes you are'

'No, but your a crazy fool!'

[northern_star]

"I'm Batman."

*ROFL*

[genclay]

*sniggers like a schoolgirl*

[kittymayhem]

*hugs* That was lovely!!

So they figured it out. Yay! I like how you had Flash figure it out bases on the motions of the Bat. It's not like him to be tender, which made this all the more enjoyable.

Then near the end, I winced cause I thought there would be this big blow up thing, but I loved the way you handled it. *smiles* I also loved how Bruce was there waiting for Clark to wake up.

Truly a great story!

*bouncing for the next part*

[genclay]

So they figured it out. Yay! I like how you had Flash figure it out bases on the motions of the Bat. It's not like him to be tender, which made this all the more enjoyable.

To me Bruce is all about family. He dose what he dose because he lost his etc. How could he not melt abit when he holds his daughter.

I winced cause I thought there would be this big blow up thing, but I loved the way you handled it.

LOL, at the moment they're both still processing, and tbh slightly in denile. I didn't want to get over the top at this point. For Bruce things haven't sunk in. For Clark his priorities are Martha then every one else... he sorts him self out last. There will be fireworks ... of every kind later.

[dm_wyatt]

Awsome update.

I love that Bruce softens around Martha and I'm really glad that Clark remembers everything... What a shock.

LOL!

I can't wait to see what comes next.

[carolandtom]

This was a wonderful chapter! I loved how Clark reacted to the big revelation and that even "Ellen" looked up to Superman.:) And I'm very happy that Bruce had that great moment of bonding with his daughter and was most of the time by Clark's bedside.

I'm glad I haven't missed this story. It's really a wonderful read! But now that I've been spoilt with so many chapters to catch up, it's going to be hard to wait so long for the next one. I'll be eagerly awaiting it!

[genclay]

Thanks for commenting all the way through and for giving it ago :)

I hope you like the rest to :p

[lilacs_roses]

Wonderful story. Still (im)patiently waiting and looking forward to the next chapter :)

[genclay]

Thanks for the comment :)

There will defiantly be more of this fairly shortly. RL bit me on the ass last month, but things are starting to sort and this is a top priority to finish :)