Fic: Missing Him - Part Five - Dreams

[genclay]

Title: Missing Him - Part Five - Dreams
Fandom: JLU
Pairings/Characters: Bruce/Clark, others
Rating: PG (this part)
Summary (This Part): Elle has problems with her new life, A chance meeting helps.
Word count: ~2150 (~9200 tatal so far)
Disclaimer: Not mine, etc.
Notes: This fic is about 20k long. It's writen but i'm still poking the last half into

Comments

[northern_star]

YAY! you updated! :) *bounces*

[genclay]

*waves*

[brushed_velvet]

Aw, poor Martha! Not knowing what's happened to Clark must be killing her. And the paragraphs describing the dreams were fabulously evocative.

Wonderful.

[genclay]

Thanks for sticking with this. :)

[kittymayhem]

Aw!

Poor Martha. Poor Elle. Poor Martha Jr.

I love the fact that you had Elle bump into Martha. That's like karma taking a backseat to the backlash it tends to bring. Her dreams must really be getting to her now, and I don't blame her one bit for going back to them. Sometimes they're our only comfort. LOVED IT!!

*bouncing eagerly for the next part*

You're a tease you know!! ^-^ And we love you for it.

[genclay]

hehe, yes i am. I'm also an unreliable tease. I'll gwtthe next bit up later today :)

[carolandtom]

I was hoping Elle would meet Martha Kent! That was a beautiful scene. I so want Martha to be able to hug her son, and granddaughter, soon!

I liked the descriptions of the dreams Elle kept having. The one in the snow was wonderful! Her subconscious keep telling her she is really a he, which makes sense. And now, with her new resolve, I'm sure Elle's long period of loneliness and confusion will be coming to an end!

*Off to part six*

[genclay]

I'm glad you like this chapter. I was a little nervous about as not a huge amount actually happens :P