Tokyo Happy Hour

[genbaku]

Comments

[yenniemonster]

Interesting story. Sounds like you're thinking about your near future. Or maybe you're listening to that Shonen Knife song? Two things to note, though...

“What the fuck, Jamie.” I cracked my other eye and checked the clock. “Jesus. It’s 3:30, Jamie. Why.” I wasn’t awake enough to form questions.
Actually, the first sentence is a question.

Second of all, two hundred isn't a thread count I'd consider very high, even though 180 is considered "high quality." I don't think anyone would start sweating it if it was under 600, but that's just me.

[genbaku]

Actually, someone just said, "It's always Happy Hour somewhere," and the idea of Tokyo Happy Hour just happened. I wasn't sure how to convey that, though he was asking questions, he was forming them like statements, hence no question marks. Also also, I bought 200 thread count sheets last year and thought I was being absurdly extravagant. I didn't even know they went up to 600!

[yenniemonster]

Haha, you know, the thread count thing actually amused me more after I posted that comment. I thought it was funny that he was getting upset over 200 thread count sheets.

Anyway, I liked your story. :)

[same_old_stars]

i am not going to correct anything in your story.
i am just going to tell you that when i come to japan i will be legal (what is the legal drinking age in japan) and we will drink sake together.

lets forget about the mongolian BBQ, that would for sure make me puke.

see you in two weeks.
<3

[snobbyshannie]

i liked it.