Signal Fire Chapter 15: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

[gen717]

Comments

[eternal_moonie]

WOOHOO! Totally love this chapter! I also loved the fact you included an article form The Star City Sentinel to make this fic more realistic! Good job hon!

[gen717]

Yay! Thanks so much, Jan. I'm really glad you liked this. The tabloid article was just something fun I thought I'd add. LOL

[lilmoochie]

“I’m glad that’s over with,” she sighed, as they entered the building.

Oliver chuckled lightly. “Me too.” He looked down at her, mischief lighting his eyes. “They’re obviously happy that I haven’t traded you in yet.”

“Or that I haven’t dumped your rich, worthless behind.”

Gen I loved this....I'm not sure where to start commenting.

1)Love me the Chlollie, wow!
2)Can Phillip follow through? Bad Lex is realllllllllyyyyyy bad...
3)Love the news papers
YOu totally rock woman, I can't wait to read more..HUGS!!

[gen717]

I'm so glad you liked this! I've never, ever written Bruce Wayne before, ever and I really have no idea if I've done him right. So I was more nervous about that, and tried to keep it simple, so as not to screw him up.

I totally was not expecting an Oliver proposal here, but as I was writing it, it just came out! LOL I think they were both happy just to be out together, and caught up in the moment, and that's what came out of Oliver's mouth. Of course he means it, but yeah, he just put it out there.

The tabloid news article was something I'd found online, you put in your own images and words, I thought it was something fun to add to the story.

Thanks so much!

[kryptolori]

Great chapter Gen, loved the 'how did I get so lucky' - 'Queen charm' hell yes that's all he needs *swoon* loved the proposal, really organic and the Ollie/Bruce convsersation at the end was spot on! and holy crap the newspapers are fantastic! They look so good together!

[gen717]

So happy that you liked it. I was more nervous about writing Bruce Wayne than anyone else here, because I've never written him before. He's coming up again too, so that'll be a challenge. I don't want to screw him up, so I'm glad you thought the Bruce/Oliver conversation was spot on. :D

[gen717]

Thanks! I'm glad Bruce turned out well so far. That was my main concern. The article was for kicks. Heee. :D

[angelbsb]

awesome . loved that bruce will be working with ollie and chloe against lex . i sort of feel bad for phillip but not really lol. i can not wait to see what you will be doing next on this.

[gen717]

I'm glad you feel sorry for Phillip, but NOT. That's how I was hoping you'd feel! My evil plan worked.. LOL

So happy you're enjoying this. :)