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eternal_moonie July 18 2009, 15:08:26 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Tess is dead!!!! *CRIES*

Anyway, this chapter was totally awesome and I canot wait to read more from you soon! I'm not sure you're familiar with Witchblade and/or GENEXT (new X-Men group) or you could read those fics of mine. Take care honey and good luck with writing!

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gen717 July 18 2009, 16:07:17 UTC
Tess was gonna die in this story. My only problem being, who was going to kill her. I had originally thought to have Chloe kill her. But, after all the murderous stuff Chloe and Oliver did on the show, that felt completely out of character and wrong to me when the writers did that. So, I didn't want to do that here.

I also considered having Lex kill her, and there's a reason why he would, coming up next (stay tuned), but that also felt wrong for the story.

Tess has shot her own guards before in my previous story, so it was in character for her to be angry with Phillip for letting them go, and shooting him on the spot. This was the best way for me to drop her, I felt. She was a great villianess though, and I loved writing her character for these stories!

I'm glad you enjoyed this. We're almost done!

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angelbsb July 18 2009, 16:56:38 UTC
oh wow loved how ollie beat the crap out of philp loved that . yes tess is dead lol . oh man what is lex up to? why does ac want to kick ollie's butt ? PPMS

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gen717 July 18 2009, 17:14:33 UTC
Yeah, I figured an Oliver/Phillip showdown was long overdue. More Lex in the next chapter. The reason A.C. wants to kick Oliver's butt, is because he left on his own without the team, and made them all worry. He's not serious. ;)

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gen717 July 18 2009, 18:57:39 UTC
Eeeeee.. thank you! I still have your story on my desktop too! I'd like to start working on that soon. I've missed writing.

Tess needed to get whacked. I figured that was the best way to do it. My original intention was to have Chloe do the deed, but it didn't feel right.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! More soon. :)

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miss_morrygan July 18 2009, 19:26:08 UTC
finally the long awaited chapter!!! gonna read it now and comment later!^^

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gen717 July 18 2009, 19:51:34 UTC
I know, right! There's a chapter before this one, don't miss it! LOL

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pipersmum July 19 2009, 01:18:05 UTC
The team didn't let them down woohoo! I liked that Phillip turned out not to be so bad after all and I loved that he killed Tess. Shame there was time to torture her first lol. Looking forward to chapter 13 :)

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gen717 July 19 2009, 20:56:13 UTC
So glad to see you around! Have you been to DFN lately? I'm trying to get our Chlollie forum back, but we need more Chlolliers there. If you could join us that would be fantastic! Here's the link:

http://devotedfansnetwork.com/forum/showthread.php?t=12435

Tess had to go, and I knew I was going to kill her off in this story, the only question was how. Chapter 13 in a few days! Thanks so much again, I've missed seeing you around. :)

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