Comments | gen717: Signal Fire Chapter 8: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

gen717

Signal Fire Chapter 8: Chloe and Oliver (NC-17)

Jan 17, 2009 22:56

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gen717 January 18 2009, 18:18:01 UTC

I'm glad you liked the manip. I hadn't had time to make one, and just sorta threw that one together. I'm glad it turned out okay. :)

gen717 January 18 2009, 18:16:47 UTC

Tess feels completely justified in her actions, and that's the most fearsome type of villain you can have, IMO, one with a cause. She blames Oliver for much of what has happened to her, and she and Lex are sort of feeding off of each others evilness.

At first I had Chloe just running to Oliver, but it didn't feel right, and she wanted to kick Tess's ass first. LOL So I added that for her. She's still a scrappy fighter, even with some one-on-one training from Oliver.. but you know many of those fight training sessions ended rather steamily. Haha.

svgurl January 18 2009, 05:53:41 UTC

Wow, what an intense chapter. My eyes were glued to the screen and my heart was in my throat.

It's so good! I love the way you write the characters. I feel so bad for all of them. Tess and Lex are nuts. I hope Ollie can save them both.

Wonderful job! I can't wait to see what happens next.

gen717 January 18 2009, 18:19:44 UTC

Thanks so much! Lex and Tess are feeding off of each other here, and both of them feel justified in what they are doing.

Ollie has a plan, sorta. ;)

sardonyx_78 January 18 2009, 11:36:17 UTC

omg.... too intense... excellent as always.

gen717 January 18 2009, 18:09:22 UTC

Thanks so much!

cold_queen_5 January 18 2009, 13:46:38 UTC

Awww, Ollie! YOU DON'T MEAN IT. SHE WON'T LET YOU MEAN IT.

You're gonna kill me with this one.

gen717 January 18 2009, 18:08:52 UTC

He does mean it, but not for the reasons you think. ;)

angelbsb January 18 2009, 17:12:34 UTC

omg tess is twisted big time . what happened to lex he is even more evil then last time lol. i have a feeling ollie's plan about getting phil to help them is working . PPMS

gen717 January 18 2009, 18:06:41 UTC

Lex and Tess are playing off of each other's evilness here. Not only that, they feel justified in their actions toward Oliver and Chloe. More soon!